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Dead Verses

Inspired by creative spark to write another poem began to scibble outpouring thoughts for skeleton slowly poetic flashes enveloped and ligamented it gripped by writer's fever, intense work followed mixing adjectives, adverbs in palatable fashion surprising lines emerged from artistic endeavour. (A verse during writing engenders more verses where it leads to is the literary adventure.) It was a meagre poem, it satisfied me not somehow it was jot alive, something was missing for some time composition lingered in languor, no master stroke to complete it - too many loose ends no more literary progress - a dead - end it seemed, just as well I am not meeting somebody's deadline. With one ladt effort tried to tescue the miscarriage reviewed the wordy construction, chopped and amended but the end result is rejected - they are dead verses. I bury them in my subconcious and await next spark maybe one day thry will resurface in verse another, unfinished verses litter the path of the writer's hike.

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Date: 3/2/2024 10:07:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 1/7/2018 7:39:00 AM
Now this is a great first post Anna... Welcome to poetry soup...
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Date: 1/2/2018 10:59:00 PM
I have a cemetery of verses...Never thought of it as you did here...A poem to think about...All the best Anna
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