Dead Sea Poet

You don't read my words
Yet long for visits from me
All take and no give?

I, too, need your praise
I hunger for a kind word
A Dead Sea Poet?

Eileen Manassian Ghali
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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March 14, 2014 at 9:22 AM
Eileen, you have wonderful happy photos, your family's extremely beautiful. After I read your blog, I clicked on your photos, like any nosy person would do. Have a blessed day. Linda
Manassian Avatar
March 14, 2014 at 9:26 AM
OH....check all you want! I LOVE photos and I check everyone's as well! :) Thank you for your kind comments, PD. :)
Dunn Avatar
February 23, 2014 at 10:02 PM
Love your title and subject matter, and what you have said rings with truth's feeling, bravo simply put thank you for sharing your work tonight i loved the read. cheri
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February 24, 2014 at 10:53 AM
Cherl, this is such a lovely and endearing post. I want to thank you for taking the time to read and post such wonderful encouragement. Hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
February 23, 2014 at 8:57 AM
Yep I am up, we had a late night but I am still up early.
Lamoureux Avatar
February 23, 2014 at 9:35 AM
Yes on my way. You haven't commented on my poem from yesterday. Is it ok?
Manassian Avatar
February 23, 2014 at 9:17 AM
:) Hope THAT was fun! ;) I have a new poem up. It's a new form I INVENTED!!!! It has some elements of swap Quatrain...Richard...I so want a form named after me....You came up with the questionku....I want something like that....Constanza....SOMETHING...that has MY name there somewhere!!! Won't you have a look and tell me your opinion, please??? Thanks! :)
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February 21, 2014 at 6:41 PM
I believe your poems are greatly under-read my little Desert Orchid and is indicative that the larger an organisation becomes the lonelier the people in it. Take care, Richard
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February 23, 2014 at 7:16 AM
I do agree with you, Mr Seal. What can be done about this??? :( I do wish my poems got more coverage, but as long as I get my regulars...INCLUDING YOU...I'm happy! :)
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February 21, 2014 at 2:44 PM
awhh, a sweet plea for affirmation,,eileen.. well, i love your poemn and here i am... brilliant in just a few words...that dead sea poet must take heed!; he must be very busy!.. lovely!.. huggs!
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February 23, 2014 at 7:17 AM
Yes, Nette. You ARE a sweetie pie, and you do visit me often. This is geared towards some poets who always get visits from me, yet hardly EVER visit. It is disturbing, to say the least. Thanks for caring enough to read and post. Means a great deal to me.
Trifiatis Avatar
February 21, 2014 at 12:27 PM
You deserve all the praise in the world for truly you have given a lot to many! Me poly agape! God bless you and your kind heart!
Manassian Avatar
February 23, 2014 at 7:18 AM
Thank you, my dear poet. it is lovely to have visits from one whose work I admire so much. Me Agapi panta.
Lamoureux Avatar
February 21, 2014 at 9:08 AM
Good Morning Eileen.
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February 23, 2014 at 7:19 AM
Good morning, Richard.......I'm just getting around to these posts. I know you should be up or getting up about now. Hope your day is fantastic. Hugs
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February 21, 2014 at 7:46 AM
Maybe you leave them speechless upon your arrival. Maybe they want you (virtually) near, hence their "need" for your comments. Either way, they should be hit in the head with a Nerf bat and return the favor. It works. I know. I Googled it...
Manassian Avatar
February 23, 2014 at 7:20 AM
WOW! Wish that were the case....leaving them speechless! ;) Lend me your Nerf bat, will ya! I'm glad you never forget me, Drake! So glad.
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February 21, 2014 at 12:40 AM
It's a shame not everyone reciprocates reads and reviews on this site. If I ever forget to return a review, feel free to remind me. This was short, but descriptively sweet.
Manassian Avatar
February 23, 2014 at 7:21 AM
Thanks ever so much, Robert. I can't be too hard here on people because I guess I've fallen into this myself. I'm talking about those whom I REGULARLY visit and who seem to have no time or inclination to drop by. You've been a dear. Thanks for the visits. :)
Sivey Avatar
February 20, 2014 at 10:45 PM
Wow, this write says so much within just a few lines! I really loved reading the words of wisdom within this fantastic poem this evening! What a phenomenal piece! Great Work!!
Manassian Avatar
February 23, 2014 at 7:22 AM
I'm glad to have this lovely visit from you, Russell. :) Thanks so much for dropping by now and again. I'm glad to read your kind words.
Lamoureux Avatar
February 20, 2014 at 7:39 PM
I know the feeling! Well expressed.
Manassian Avatar
February 23, 2014 at 7:21 AM
:) Glad you feel with me
Mcdaid Avatar
February 20, 2014 at 6:39 PM
very beautifully crafted eileen excellent piece
Smith Avatar
February 20, 2014 at 5:01 PM
Wow, This is great Eileen...Hugs Tim
Manassian Avatar
February 20, 2014 at 5:08 PM
Thanks, Tim. Glad that you dropped by.
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