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Dead Man’s Shoes They were leather. Black, brown, and green. He wore the best, as his feet were his weakness. He had strong arms, strong legs, a grasp of iron, and could run like no ones business. not from things, but to things. The rest of his clothes, old, worn, and mended. Not his shoes. They were nice, and well cared for. His wife missed him so. She missed her hero, Her man of the hour. She missed things, she did not know, she missed. The shoes, were packed up. Not quickly, but with precise and specific meaning. They were taken to the shelter. Not the thrift. They were given to strangers. They would never know, “him”, but they may someday, know “Him”. That was just enough hope, For her…to let go.

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Date: 12/9/2019 12:13:00 PM
An optimistic poem that brought Godliness back into my mind's eye.
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Ann Foster
Date: 12/9/2019 3:31:00 PM
I am so humbled... ty friend. That made my whole day, and maybe the week. God give you every blessing... and more... Ann
Date: 12/5/2019 7:30:00 AM
It would seem that in retrospection his feet were his strength. Beautifully written and sharply thought provoking.
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Date: 12/5/2019 8:48:00 AM
Thank you friend. Blessings on your Christmas and a safe and Happy New Year to you. Ann
Date: 12/4/2019 1:26:00 PM
Ann - one of your best, gripping from the start. The ending is sublime. A FAVE. Well done..Ron x
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Date: 12/4/2019 1:43:00 PM
You are so kind. Thank you... Blessings on your day. Ann
Date: 12/4/2019 12:56:00 PM
Poignant, Ann. Lovely penning.
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Ann Foster
Date: 12/4/2019 1:13:00 PM
Thank you friend. God Bless you and good morning. Have a lovely day. Ty for stopping by... Ann

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