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Dead Man Walking

If Pen is mightier than the sword I am dead man walking All of these letters, bullets. They rip through Skin and crush bone Words sharp gnaw On Ears And eyes Line after line Cuts as paper a thousand times over Every vowel and every consonant Transformed into verse Hammers Flesh into submission I will bleed With each allusion Would I have known That in this was no healing balm This poetry is Idolatry And this is my suicide

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Date: 3/2/2017 7:53:00 AM
Thank you for commenting on my poem, so I could find your poetry. This is wonderful. It's insanely good and I love it very much! You say my imagery was good, but yours is great.... That is what writing is, what poetry is. It condenses us away till we almost disappear into pen and ink only.
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