Dead End

A random road wanders across the desert
as voluminous clouds chase the rising sun 
nary a sound can be heard, save for the
whipping wind and clicks of insects. 

The yawning horizon stretches out
reaching towards a vast, expansive sea
its crystalline beauty is but a deceptive liar
for death surrounds her ever lapping shores. 

Almost uninhabitable she is
like a barren womb in want
her waters are lifeless, a fluid grave
bearing witness of her desolate decay. 

Fish carcasses tell their solemn tales
along her distant, lonely shores
their bony apertures are splayed and pecked 
hungry seagulls circle, hunting for scraps. 

Relentless winds are spreading littered
whitewashed bones
causing them to tumble about
conjuring up a false sense of life. 

Now the moon is rising
as acrid air hovers over the sullen sea
the winds seem to shout, “go away”
a dull emptiness prevails. 

The blackest night, save for the moon
descends upon this accursed place
where the bony beach rattles its lifeless tunes
along a haunting shoreline
that no one wants to see
where no one wants to be
beside the Salton Sea.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Kendrick Avatar
June 28, 2025 at 2:51 AM
Congratulations on your winning work in the contest. Way to go. Sara K
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July 1, 2025 at 3:24 PM
Thank you, Sara! :)
Carmack Avatar
June 22, 2025 at 12:25 PM
I was happy to see you on the winner's list. Congrats.
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June 23, 2025 at 6:37 PM
Thank you, Rob, for my placement in your contest! I really appreciate it! :)
Manassian Avatar
February 24, 2025 at 9:05 PM
What imagery! I feel like I've been there. What desolation. Bleak, indeed. Great choice of words, Laura. Big hugs to you
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February 25, 2025 at 9:22 AM
Thank you, Eileen. Very happy you liked this! I appreciate you stopping by! :)
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December 6, 2024 at 9:54 AM
A beautiful, eloquent verse, Laura. Wonderful!!!
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December 8, 2024 at 5:15 PM
Thank you, Terry! I truly appreciate your encouraging words! :)
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November 13, 2024 at 10:25 AM
Laura, power and emotive come to mind in reading this expose of a fleshless sea where life is only a skeleton - a reminder of life that once flourished. Powerful poem of desolation. I like the title. Thank you for sharing this poem. Sending you blessings of autumn joy as life transitions once again!
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November 14, 2024 at 2:49 AM
Thank you, Sam, for stopping by to comment! I’m glad you liked this one! I appreciate it! :)
One Avatar
October 24, 2024 at 12:55 PM
Hello my friend it has been a while.. Your poem is a haunting and evocative portrayal of the Salton Sea and its desolate beauty. Through vivid imagery and careful symbolism, it captures the eerie stillness and lifelessness of the landscape, while also touching on deeper themes of mortality and decay. The poem's tone and atmosphere create a sense of discomfort, drawing the reader into a world where life has ceased and only the echoes of the past remain.
Leiser Avatar
October 24, 2024 at 9:02 PM
Hi Silent! Thank you for your thoughtful comments and support! I appreciate you stopping by. I have not written much lately, so haven’t been as involved on PS. I hope all is well with you. Looking forward to reading your latest poems soon! :)
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