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Dead End

A random road wanders across the desert as voluminous clouds chase the rising sun nary a sound can be heard, save for the whipping wind and clicks of insects. The yawning horizon stretches out reaching towards a vast, expansive sea its crystalline beauty is but a deceptive liar for death surrounds her ever lapping shores. Almost uninhabitable she is like a barren womb in want her waters are lifeless, a fluid grave bearing witness of her desolate decay. Fish carcasses tell their solemn tales along her distant, lonely shores their bony apertures are splayed and pecked hungry seagulls circle, hunting for scraps. Relentless winds are spreading littered whitewashed bones, causing them to tumble about conjuring up a false sense of life. Now the moon is rising as acrid air hovers over the sullen sea the winds seem to shout, “go away” a dull emptiness prevails. The blackest night, save for the moon descends upon this accursed place where the bony beach rattles its lifeless tunes along a haunting shoreline that no one wants to see where no one wants to be beside the Salton Sea.

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Date: 2/24/2025 9:05:00 PM
What imagery! I feel like I've been there. What desolation. Bleak, indeed. Great choice of words, Laura. Big hugs to you
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Laura Leiser
Date: 2/25/2025 9:22:00 AM
Thank you, Eileen. Very happy you liked this! I appreciate you stopping by! :)
Date: 12/6/2024 9:54:00 AM
A beautiful, eloquent verse, Laura. Wonderful!!!
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/9/2025 11:30:00 AM
Aye lad!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 12/8/2024 5:15:00 PM
Thank you, Terry! I truly appreciate your encouraging words! :)
Date: 11/13/2024 10:25:00 AM
Laura, power and emotive come to mind in reading this expose of a fleshless sea where life is only a skeleton - a reminder of life that once flourished. Powerful poem of desolation. I like the title. Thank you for sharing this poem. Sending you blessings of autumn joy as life transitions once again!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/14/2024 2:49:00 AM
Thank you, Sam, for stopping by to comment! I’m glad you liked this one! I appreciate it! :)
Date: 10/24/2024 12:55:00 PM
Hello my friend it has been a while.. Your poem is a haunting and evocative portrayal of the Salton Sea and its desolate beauty. Through vivid imagery and careful symbolism, it captures the eerie stillness and lifelessness of the landscape, while also touching on deeper themes of mortality and decay. The poem's tone and atmosphere create a sense of discomfort, drawing the reader into a world where life has ceased and only the echoes of the past remain.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 10/24/2024 9:02:00 PM
Hi Silent! Thank you for your thoughtful comments and support! I appreciate you stopping by. I have not written much lately, so haven’t been as involved on PS. I hope all is well with you. Looking forward to reading your latest poems soon! :)
Date: 10/24/2024 6:28:00 AM
I see you changed the title, I guess you decided not to do the contest. No matter, your depiction of a once vibrant and now dead sea and it's visible remnants of previous life is outstanding. A cursed place indeed
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Laura Leiser
Date: 10/24/2024 7:54:00 AM
Thank you, Tom! I so appreciate your supportive comments, as I often doubt myself. I felt this title fit better with the poem. It’s still in the contest, but I don’t expect it to place because the emphasis is more on the Salton Sea (a true location) than a bone beach. Hugs! :)

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