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Dead Woman's Ditch

Young Johnny Walford was a handsome man He possessed a keen intelligent mind Yet the life he desperately desired In the end poor Johnny would never find Lack of education, coal dusted hands His heart was set on the Miller's daughter Sadly one night he strayed with Jane Shorney Made his life into the stuff of fodder He was forced to marry against his will Jane Shorney was now carrying his child He could not bare the thought of forever Her screeching voice, made him insanely wild It was but three weeks into his marriage Our young Johnny couldn't take anymore He clubbed her on the head and slit her throat This was more than they had both bargained for He took her body, threw it in a ditch Then he tried to cover it with dirt In her hand she clutched a piece of fabric She had foresight to hold onto his shirt Her body found there with a hue and a cry Johnny was dragged in chains through the streets Hanged on the gibbet for passers by It is said that a year later they would meet She haunts both ditch and gibbet to this day Her banshee voice screeches berating him Poor Johnny would prefer to be in heel Her words feel like being torn limb from limb A Shadowlam production. Great topic for a poem Shadow thanks for inviting me to write this one with you.

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Date: 2/24/2014 7:19:00 PM
Narsty goins orn in darkest Zumerzet ooo arrr, (local accent) lol. Enjoyed the story, well done both you. No new poem Rick so I came digging up old bodies haha. Take care, Richard
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/24/2014 8:15:00 PM
Your comment is most entertaining my friend. Thanks for digging this one up.
Date: 1/27/2014 11:57:00 AM
There's much to be said about a bit of dark irony. I've never seen the word 'gibbet' used in a poem. Very interesting. You and Shadow merged an excellent partnership with this one. I'll be chuckling to mysel for a while. Banshee nagging. Hahaha :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/27/2014 12:04:00 PM
The banshee line is attibuted to my friend Shadow. So glad we could entertain.
Date: 1/27/2014 10:58:00 AM
Excellent write RL! You had me enthralled!...smile ...Poor Johnny, having to listen to that "Bit*hes Banshee Sh*t for eternity!-Hahahahaha-LMAO! Great Write...Love it! Robert
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/27/2014 12:05:00 PM
That would truly be hell!
Date: 1/24/2014 8:04:00 AM
You and Shadow tell a wonderful story together. Loved it.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 1/25/2014 6:41:00 PM
ty Monterey its fun writing with Rick Shadow x smile hug
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/24/2014 8:06:00 AM
Good morning Monterey, I have missed you. How are things in your world?
Date: 1/23/2014 6:45:00 AM
Richard, This is a very very good poem. I enjoyed every part of it.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 1/25/2014 6:07:00 PM
ty Roger much appreciated Shadow x smile hug
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/23/2014 7:35:00 AM
Thanks Roger, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 1/22/2014 9:55:00 PM
Good lord this was awesome! Crazy atmosphere. You both are like the Sonny & Cher of Poetry Soup.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 1/24/2014 5:29:00 AM
lmao Drake I am no Cher glad you liked it Shadow x smile hug
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/23/2014 7:33:00 AM
Ha, ha, have you given any thought to the poem I started for us?
Date: 1/22/2014 9:27:00 PM
hey is this for that one contest grab a partner. how COOL this is. It puts me in mind of the murder investigation stories I have grown addicted too on tv lately. On the ID channel. It has been inspiring a few dark things in me lately. again, I have to say. this is SO COOL.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/23/2014 7:31:00 AM
No it was Shadow's inspiration and she invited me to write about a 200 year old Ghost story.
Date: 1/22/2014 8:36:00 PM
This a great read. I would love if it would continue with the hauntings. Tim
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 1/24/2014 5:27:00 AM
that can be arranged lol Somerset abounds with them Shadow x smile hug
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/22/2014 9:27:00 PM
Interesting thought.
Date: 1/22/2014 7:23:00 PM
hate to say it but it's the same old story. just different names.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 1/24/2014 5:23:00 AM
this is a true story about real people and both the giblet and ditch are still there John. The ditch called dead woman's ditch is a linear earthwork visible from space Shadow
Date: 1/22/2014 4:18:00 PM
Hi Rick an interesting subject the ditch is still there where she was buried. last stanza last line change heel to hell lol. ty for joining me in penning this Shadow x smile hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/22/2014 4:25:00 PM
My pleasure Shadow
Date: 1/22/2014 3:47:00 PM
a well-told tale - love the ending!
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Date: 1/22/2014 3:46:00 PM
a well-told tale - love the ending!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/22/2014 4:25:00 PM
Thanks ilene
Date: 1/22/2014 2:18:00 PM
Interesting poem you penned up there. Kept me reading . I haven't posted any new poems as of late :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/22/2014 2:36:00 PM
Let me know when you do Debbie. Thanks for reading and commenting.
Date: 1/22/2014 10:30:00 AM
Please check the pronoun in third line of 4th stanza.....missing an r there
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/22/2014 10:38:00 AM
Oops, thanks for catching it. Hugs Rick.

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