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Dead-end Street

Down the desolation of a dead-end street, Lost love's whisper, a heartbeat's retreat. Echoes of laughter, now silenced and cold, The tale of a journey, a story untold. Gone are the riches, the glittering gold, Faded dreams in a tale that unfolds. Job's embrace, a fleeting affair, Friends once near, now distant air. In shadows of despair, I tread the way, Searching for light in the muted gray. The weight of loss, a burden to bear, On this lonely path of deep despair. But in the darkness, a flicker appears, A distant light, through my silent tears. A glimmer of hope on this desolate track, A chance to rebuild what despair did lack.

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Date: 11/16/2023 5:08:00 PM
Jay its a chilling poem, that makes me feel melancholy til the end when you offer a glimmer of hope.. To take the reader out of their comfort zone, with such a few words, is to me, what poetry is all about. If I walk away feeling differently to the way I felt when I began reading, I know I have read a wonderful poem. That's what yours is my friend.
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Date: 11/14/2023 10:08:00 PM
Strong words of despair and hope, Jay. I enjoyed you well written poetry, my friend. Have a great week! Bill
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Date: 11/14/2023 11:01:00 AM
You found light in the darkness, Jay. I haven't written for this one yet, but I'm thinking I'll end up on the dead end street, lost and alone.
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Date: 11/14/2023 10:51:00 AM
- We both went for this contest, Jay ... but, totally different theme ... I like your proposal ... a winner for sure:) - hugs
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