De-Fabl

DE-FABL
Darkness Eternaly Forced Away By Love
By:Jessica Trotte AKA RECK


He slips away silently, to escape mothers screams
and crawls so softly, into bed, into dreams
his thoughts became so dark, full of misery and dread
and dreams repeated over and over, where he became dead
left to one escape, escape to the dark
open eyes, nightmares of screams scarring the heart 
across the shadows, his eyes opened wide
he saw vanishing, the last glimpse of light
tears welled up, but never did spill
he swore he was stronger than those
his father would hit him, make him need to take pills
if he ever saw on his face, a tiny tear
He would never show him, not while he was here

Silent and steady, blades ran across skin
crimson rivers leaving bloody trails on her then
tears poured freely, in the privacy of her bed,
she called out silently for help from God
mother was screaming, father didn't care
she was ready, to pitifully pull the trigger
she crawled into shadows, her eyes squeezing tight
prayers sent to God, that she would be alright
across the shadows, her eyes opened wide
as she saw appearing the growing white light
her tears dried up, in the glowing warmth, ready for a fight
though she felt loved, not the hurt from before

She called out quietly, "hElLo, iS SoMeoNE TheRe?"
Her voice like satin ribbons in her hair

His eyes opened again, whispers in his ear, 
and called out so quietly, "HeLlO, iS sOmEOnE thErE?"

Through the light, a vision of he
She would find him, through her dreams
Through the dark, he saw a rose
arms curled around herself, cold

her hand pressed quietly against the glass
in her heart she felt a warm blast
through his ribs he felt a new beat
warmth creeping in like sugar water ready to seep

Closing her eyes, she let out a sigh
and whispered "DeAr lOrD, iM AfRAiD iM rEaDY tO DiE"
Hearing her words, though he didnt know how
he left his bed, and to her reached out

Closing around her, a warm pair of arms
Starteled, she thought he was God
Then opened her eyes, and saw it was he
A boy needing comfort, sent to she

He looked at her softly, a rose in her hair
"BaBY, iLL lOvE yOu, DoNt bE ScArEd"
She looked at him lovingly, unable to not stare
"bAbY, GoD SeNt YoU hErE"

through the dark, they held on tight
praying to God, they swore they'd survive
He had her, his little rose
She had him, warm arms to hold
God looked down, and smiled with no sin
and promised, theyd still love each other in heaven

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 7/14/2014 7:59:00 PM
did you write this? are you Reck. or did Jessica blaze this story out? Either way, it rules.
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Date: 6/1/2010 5:53:00 AM
Rain, truly a mesmerizing poem! just shook my head to clear! jimbo
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Date: 5/11/2010 6:39:00 PM
Wow Rain you have a lot of poems. So a friend name Reck wrote this. still so awesome. Tell me how long have you been at the soup. and you are so young, enjoyed the read Rain, always p.d.
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Date: 1/22/2010 12:06:00 PM
This is so beautiful. Definately my favourite of yours I've read. Very pretty poem. Thank you. Matt <3
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Date: 10/27/2009 10:02:00 AM
You bring reality to my fantasy whenever I read your words. Absolutely Wonderful, love. Your Love, .::James::.
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Date: 10/6/2009 12:25:00 PM
wonderful write here, thanks for your comments on my works.
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Date: 6/23/2009 2:55:00 PM
Woeew!BOOO this is quite a beauty!:)I Love it!your Best!Gone to my favs!<333
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Date: 5/28/2009 6:11:00 PM
WOW... great write!!!! Its soo beautiful =)
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Date: 5/23/2009 11:39:00 PM
Jese, congrats on your feature...Raul
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Date: 5/23/2009 4:42:00 PM
Keep believing Jese. Congrats on "De-Fabl" being featured. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 5/23/2009 8:22:00 AM
Brillaint write Jessica, congratulations on this fine piece being featured, James
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Date: 5/22/2009 2:32:00 PM
Jessica, this poem reminds me of eternal marriages that are performed in some temples. They are different than the "...'til death do you part." vows. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Keep writing, Love and Hugs, Dane
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Date: 5/21/2009 6:58:00 AM
I love the passion with which you write, this piece is awesome. Great you .Congrats on your wonderful poem being featured this week. love Leke
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Date: 5/21/2009 6:01:00 AM
An awesome write ... congratulations on this poem being featured ... and for the genius of it.
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Date: 5/18/2009 6:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
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Date: 5/18/2009 3:34:00 AM
Jessica, congratulations on being featured this week. More success. Ernilando
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Date: 5/4/2009 12:15:00 PM
Jessica, this poem is amazing! Great work! Loved it even more in the second read.
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Date: 4/28/2009 12:18:00 PM
I'm thinking od something with Eternal or Immortal Love. Great poem...Raul
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Date: 4/20/2009 6:58:00 PM
chck wat my interpretation was..... Titled: "Windows Apart"
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Date: 4/20/2009 6:46:00 PM
whew this is ooowewe.... What can I say vivid, a vivid struggle if the persona wasnot now male I'd wonder if you hav lived it. GOAL!!!
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Date: 4/17/2009 11:58:00 PM
His dreams became so dark Left them to his escape into to dark To dream open eyes outside window Across his vision he saw as light lost its flicker {I'm gonna stop there (4now), continue please you can use my insert and flow onwards}
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Date: 4/15/2009 9:11:00 PM
Having to escape through dreams is sad, Jessica. Is there another party of "Not Finished" yet to be written? You've caught my attention!
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