Dazzling Magic Display

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pop, pop, pop a surprise bursting in the sky white, red, and blue sparks in the dark gray smoke and smell winds around of gunpowder left behind 1/1/2019

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/2/2019 7:21:00 PM

Yep, it can stink but, it's worth it.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/1/2019 7:56:00 AM

Ah, there were so many delightful ones, Eve. Did you see the video of the Hong Kong fireworks? If you have not, you might want to look it up. They remind me of this terrific poem. I had forgotten of the smell left behind.

Silent One

Date: 1/1/2019 6:59:00 AM

I dont like firewords, but your poem creates the imagery perfectly...

Arthur Vaso

Date: 1/1/2019 2:11:00 AM

This reminds me a bit the American National anthem, because the fireworks part, is based on Canada and the war of 1812!! :) Happy New Years!!!!!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/1/2019 1:42:00 AM

There was some awesome displays' from around the world Eve. Happy new year. Tom.