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Daze of Bright Ages

Dies, where did time go? Lies, when I’d wrinkle slow. Lids of eyes, crow's feet stomp. Lads look away, see no pomp. Lady, your silver hair is dyed. Lazy joints take me for a ride. Hazy is my history and mind. Haze of clarity - need to rewind. Maze of the season - nevermind. Daze of bright ages, realigned. Dame hears “Ho! Ho!,” fine silver bell, Fame of Christ child, where all is well.

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Date: 12/24/2024 3:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your winner in Brian's contest. Way to go. Thank you for sharing your work with us. Sara K
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/24/2024 6:30:00 AM
Thank you, Sara!
Date: 12/14/2024 3:19:00 PM
A very honest and real piece, dear Kim - respect goes out to you <3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/14/2024 7:47:00 PM
Thank you, sweet friend!
Date: 12/12/2024 3:03:00 PM
I get it Kim. The years get faster as you grow older and aging starts being notice more when we look in the mirror... Michael
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/14/2024 7:46:00 PM
It sure does! Thanks, Mike!
Date: 12/11/2024 9:59:00 AM
How well you have captured Maturing! And wonderful how well you are at creating. I enjoyed your safety net in the last line. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/11/2024 6:35:00 PM
Thank you, dear one!
Date: 12/10/2024 6:42:00 PM
I like this creative write right, Those last two linesare sooo perfect! Pangie
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/11/2024 5:07:00 AM
Thank you so much, Pangie! Merry Christmas!
Date: 12/10/2024 2:43:00 AM
Great verse. Flows so well. You are in the master class.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/10/2024 5:25:00 AM
I appreciate you, my friend! xx
Date: 12/9/2024 10:28:00 AM
Growing up or growing old, who decides the difference?
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/9/2024 11:00:00 AM
Who knows! Thank you, Kory!
Date: 12/9/2024 9:30:00 AM
so cute poem, full of ideas and gems, enjoyed yann
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/9/2024 9:43:00 AM
Thanks so much!
Date: 12/9/2024 8:42:00 AM
Like the energy of this it flows so well! I giggled at the 3rd stanza! Well done!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/9/2024 9:43:00 AM
Glad you liked it :) Thank you, Karen!
Date: 12/9/2024 8:12:00 AM
- It would be wonderful to rewind... with angelic hair and silky smooth skin, Kim :) - hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/9/2024 9:44:00 AM
One day, one heavenly day… sigh :) Hugs

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