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August- 3- 2024

This Acrostic or That Acrostic Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Miranda Howley

~ Placed Third~

D…day dawns in shimmering light. A…across the skies, sunbeams appear bright. Y…yellow gold is sprinkled in the East. S…sun arrives in regal grace as the High priest. T…tranquil is the morning, assuring a beautiful day. A…angelic blessings coming on our way. R…radiant sunshine dispels all trace of gloom!

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Miranda Hawley

Date: 8/19/2024 8:22:00 AM

Often many people talk about a majestic sunset, but you are talking about a sunrise, and that is impressive. My job as a bus monitor for special needs students allows me to see the break of day most mornings *at least on a day there is school. Oh, oh oh on your last line, it is spot on! Congratulations on your win in my contest.

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 8/17/2024 6:30:00 PM

My favorite phrase is your comparison of the sun to a "high priest" with the inclusion of grace. Insightful and unique. I do miss the sun on those seasons when it seems to hide its face. Congrats on your remarkable piece.

Karen Jones

Date: 8/6/2024 7:35:00 AM

What a calming and peaceful poem full of wonderful imagery! I enjoyed reading this.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/5/2024 3:11:00 PM

oh I feel the joy in your writing...a feel- good energy surrounds me, valsa...wonderful!

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 8/5/2024 7:29:00 AM

Dear Valsa, There are so many things I love about this poem, but perhaps most significant is the underlying message of a creator. A creator who brings us great things in our lives, our Daystar!! - Good luck on the contest! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daneil

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 8/4/2024 3:04:00 PM

This is a glowing poem of dawn. It is beautiful to read.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/3/2024 8:35:00 PM

'Sun arrives in regal grace as the High priest.' Frame that line forever, Valsa. Simply lovely! Thanks, Gershon

Joe Dimino

Date: 8/3/2024 5:14:00 PM

Indeed, earths up-close, personal brilliance. Well said. Shine on with your lovely poetry!

Jay Narain

Date: 8/3/2024 11:43:00 AM

Nice Acrostic with beautiful picture.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/3/2024 10:12:00 AM

What a Lovely Acrostic Write with a Great/Pretty Picture. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a wonderful/blessed day...................

Ink Empress

Date: 8/3/2024 6:29:00 AM

This is soul warming! So beautiful how youv painted imagery and written an acrostic that flows with yellow gold of dawn and so much more and i cant help but dream away! Angelic blessings too so well written about. And the picture fits the picture prompt so well! I especially love “ D…day dawns in shimmering light. A…across the skies, sunbeams appear bright. Y…yellow gold is sprinkled in the East. S…sun arrives in regal grace as the High priest“ just stunning!!! Best wishes for the contest.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/3/2024 3:17:00 AM

An acrostic in rhyme. So well done with great imagery. Best for a win.

Yann Rolland

Date: 8/2/2024 11:21:00 PM

enlightning poem, so graceful images, enjoyed yann