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Daysarntgolden

shes the one who fixed the cracks shes the one who brought me back shes the one ive come to love shes the one sent from above yet here i am with a hole in my head & one in my chest to match trust isnt free but im sure youll agree im broken too softly spoken these days arnt golden not anymore the pain is too much to ignore what have i done to push you away what have i done i want you to stay what have i done i dont know what to say what have i done i regret that day shes the one who broke the cracks shes the one who stabbed my back

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Date: 9/12/2011 7:22:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Zach. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 9/12/2011 12:37:00 AM
WELCOME TO POETRY SOUP.. SO ENJOYED READING YOUR MOST CREATIVE WRITE TONIGHT.. ENJOY THE SITE WITH ITS MANY FEATURES AS U CONTINUE TO SHARE WORDS WITH LUV.. THANKXX FOR YOUR SWEET CRITIQUE ON MY POETRY LUV..
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Date: 9/11/2011 3:55:00 PM
Interesting work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara
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