Days of Rhyme and Snoozes

I sit here relishing
a custard-filled
and chocolate-topped
choux bun.
If I had a trumpet 
I’d surely blow it.
It seems that I’m
“An Emerging Poet”
and, icing on the cake,
I’ve “got potential”.
Imagine my elation 
at such an unexpected 
elevation. My many years 
of scribbling, so long
unheralded, unheard,
pleasing but me and me alone,
and now at last the gods atone
for past disdain 
and disappointment.
Yet even as I contemplate 
my new persona, I surely know 
a day of reckoning awaits.
In old age now, my words 
grow trite and rusty.
I fear that, sitting here,
awaiting inspiration 
for yet another new creation,
my rhyming days are almost done
and, truth be told, I’d rather have
another deliciously inspiring bun,
to be followed by, maybe, just perhaps,
another of my afternoon naps.
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Rees Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 7:09 AM
Many thanks for your comment, Ms Dilly Dally. Just a bit of fun with perhaps the slightest grain of truth !
Brewer Avatar
February 15, 2022 at 5:08 AM
You are a man after my own heart (and stomach). A vicariously delicious litany of thoughts, images and impulses familiar to those of us of mature persuasion.
Rees Avatar
October 5, 2022 at 1:32 AM
Thank you for your recognition of our mutually enjoyed condition.
Lawrence Avatar
February 2, 2022 at 6:32 PM
…. You have captured your state of mind and these moments in time so deliciously Peter ! I love I’d rather have another deliciously inspiring bun, to be followed by, maybe, just perhaps, another of my afternoon naps. Wonderful !! Keep writing your rhymes . Hugs, Susan :)
Rees Avatar
February 3, 2022 at 1:12 AM
Thank you Susan for this lovely comment. I’m so pleased you enjoyed . I can recommend the buns.
Radice Avatar
February 2, 2022 at 9:17 AM
Loved this Peter! I love reading your poems. Have a bottle of wine and some roses on me to go with your (M&S?) choux bun. You deserve it. Cheers - Gary
Rees Avatar
February 2, 2022 at 9:38 AM
Brilliant comment Gary. Thank you. And yes, you’re right about the M&S Choux bun.
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