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Days of Rain

Day one of rain, rattles down our drain In the air there's a new fresh smell Day two of rain I'm working tonight So easy to sleep and feel well! Day three of rain, the grass shines new A gully washed down by our home Day four of rain, is a little bit much We feel cooped up and very alone! Day five of rain, would prove the end Leaving my yard, a murky soaked marsh Then someone said, "We needed it, though!" What I replied, came out quite harsh!

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Date: 10/6/2018 12:48:00 PM
Yes it's good to have the rain back, but five days of it would get to me too (love that last line!)
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Pat Adams
Date: 10/6/2018 4:00:00 PM
Thanks Michelle!!!....glad you liked it!........pat
Date: 10/3/2018 6:33:00 PM
I'm with you, Pat - I love a one-day yard waterer, and that's enough!
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Pat Adams
Date: 10/4/2018 9:31:00 AM
I know, right? Too much of a good thing!......80)

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