Days Long Departed

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I recall days long departed when I was just a kid oh, how I loved mother's garden I would run in the sun and play all day down paths now vanished . . . I would lay spread-eagle on the scented grass of an emerald carpet laid just for me I would creep among the shade trees and climb to the highest branches where I would sit for hours and hours listening to the birds twitter and dance I would pluck some blossoms place them in a pickle jar for mother and she would exclaim happily at what a delightful child I was my childhood was full of happiness watching the little birds play in the bird bath but no more for now the garden is but a thorny field and mother is long, long gone and I . . . I grew up _______________________ August 27, 2012 Poetry/Free Verse/Days Long Departed Copyright Protected, ID 18-1097-552-01 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted into the Contest No 150, Standard Brian Strand First Place

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Date: 12/24/2018 9:08:00 PM
Just stopping back to congratulate you on your first-place win in Brian's contest, Dear. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/26/2018 8:38:00 AM
Carolyn, thanks so much for the congratulations !
Date: 12/22/2018 9:50:00 PM
Hon, your childhood (and family) were so much like mine. It was Grandma's garden in early childhood and she let me play there as long as I didn't touch her flowers. Later we moved and Mom had a wonderful garden. I learned so much from both of them and miss them. Too bad we all have to grow up. Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 12/23/2018 8:51:00 AM
Carolyn, thank you for that lovely comment, yes it seems our childhoods were similar, for my grandma was a big part of mine also, well she is the reason I write and Dear Heart was her affectionate name for me. Well, at least we still have those wonderful memories, no one and nothing can take those away from us ~
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