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Daydreaming Girl

Through the amorous forest, path of illumination, cascading slopes of miniature waterfalls, treasury of trees, spreading their arbor, hilly rocks for a daydreaming girl to sit upon. Lantern, like lightning bugs. The essence of fairy mirth. The teen is pretty in her cream-colored nightgown, honey-blonde tresses twisted and clipped. Her arms wrap around bent knees. Her contemplation of reality, it’s ethereal in this wholesome clip of paradise. Sweet honesty wonders what life will be. Momentum whispers of love, friendship, and adventure. Hem of her nightie dips into the wet, like an underwater iceberg before life gets real. She’s a moonlight silhouette. 2/15/2022

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Date: 2/17/2022 1:39:00 PM
A fave for me Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/17/2022 2:09:00 PM
Thank you! So glad you like this one!
Date: 2/16/2022 8:42:00 PM
Brooke Shields died her hair?! ~ Blue Lagoon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/17/2022 5:44:00 AM
Very funny, Mr. Wolf :)
Date: 2/16/2022 11:10:00 AM
Ah, this is so beautifully worded. I can see her so clearly, and so sweetly through your precious poem!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/16/2022 1:22:00 PM
Thank you, BJ!
Date: 2/16/2022 6:26:00 AM
Wonderfully dreamy--sweet honesty--so well said, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/16/2022 8:57:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay!
Date: 2/16/2022 6:18:00 AM
I love this, especially the last stanza and last line.... lovely, and great imagery.. nice to see you still writing so well..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/16/2022 8:58:00 AM
Thank you for the encouragement, my dear friend! Great to hear from you! <3
Date: 2/16/2022 2:54:00 AM
"Through the amorous forest, path of illumination, cascading slopes of miniature waterfalls" Such enchanting imagery! "like an underwater iceberg before life gets real." Perhaps that is the loss, the dream falling to the real -- to be honest, we came from a dream, moving father away, searching the real...for a mystical beginning. Sounds backwards. Mystical, fairy-tale like write. Love it!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/16/2022 5:58:00 AM
Thank you so much, Joe! Love your commentary!
Date: 2/15/2022 11:36:00 PM
How sweet, the dreams and wonderings of innocence and youth. Lovely imagery in this one, Kim. Pleasant and calming effect in reading. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us, Bill
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/16/2022 5:58:00 AM
Thank you, Bill! Glad you enjoyed!
Date: 2/15/2022 11:10:00 PM
the perfect images of a daydreamer!! I really loved the ending on this one.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/16/2022 5:58:00 AM
Thank you, my sweet friend!
Date: 2/15/2022 8:12:00 PM
You have created a dreamy setting for the dreaming girl to sit and dream on ! Love the last line much..."She’s a moonlight silhouette". Lovely penning Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/15/2022 8:45:00 PM
Thank you, Valsa!

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