Daydreaming

Daydreaming sets us free,
free to do anything,
be anything within the
realm of imagination.

A release from reality,
a world in which there is
complete control.

Where decisions are never wrong,
a place without violence, where 
contentment  massages the soul.

A world through which frustration
and anger are expelled causing a release,
a calming effect, maybe a new beginning.

Daydreaming sets us free to 
return to reality.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Johnson Avatar
June 27, 2010 at 1:18 PM
Lovely poem Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyoce
Dietrich Avatar
June 24, 2010 at 2:55 PM
I remember I daydreamed a lot (as a teen) Then reality set in. I kind of stopped after that! Congratulations, LUv, Andrea
Brown Avatar
June 24, 2010 at 5:34 AM
Congratulations Mac on your win in Nikko Palmario's contest "Your Snooze, You Choose". Love, Carol
K. Avatar
June 24, 2010 at 2:11 AM
I just couldn't help but agree with all that you said in this daydreaming poem of yours, Mac :) Very nicely said! One particular line that really stayed with me was "contentment massages the soul"--wonderful line!! Congrats on being in my winners' list :) --nikko :)
Guzzi Avatar
February 7, 2010 at 1:30 PM
Yes all true...what are your day dreams? Light & Love
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 7, 2010 at 1:31 AM
Mac, We are free to contemplate anthing we desire in our daydreams, how true and how inspiring is this message you convey in this wonderfully written poem! Blessings, Connie
Owens Avatar
February 6, 2010 at 8:35 PM
I love the statement that contentment "massages the soul" Wonderful poem Mac...Enjoyed...Marty
Sweetheart Avatar
February 6, 2010 at 5:48 PM
SOUP MAIL...
Sweetheart Avatar
February 6, 2010 at 5:24 PM
Imaginative and introspective at the same time Mac and your last two lines are the foundation of this "beauty"... I appreciate your comments and am quite flattered that u think of me as a master poet... u have been a refreshing bright light to this site.. hey .. that rhymes...luv.. "Sweetheart"
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