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Daydreaming

Daydreaming sets us free, free to do anything, be anything within the realm of imagination. A release from reality, a world in which there is complete control. Where decisions are never wrong, a place without violence, where contentment massages the soul. A world through which frustration and anger are expelled causing a release, a calming effect, maybe a new beginning. Daydreaming sets us free to return to reality.

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Date: 6/27/2010 1:18:00 PM
Lovely poem Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyoce
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Date: 6/24/2010 2:55:00 PM
I remember I daydreamed a lot (as a teen) Then reality set in. I kind of stopped after that! Congratulations, LUv, Andrea
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Date: 6/24/2010 5:34:00 AM
Congratulations Mac on your win in Nikko Palmario's contest "Your Snooze, You Choose". Love, Carol
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Date: 6/24/2010 2:11:00 AM
I just couldn't help but agree with all that you said in this daydreaming poem of yours, Mac :) Very nicely said! One particular line that really stayed with me was "contentment massages the soul"--wonderful line!! Congrats on being in my winners' list :) --nikko :)
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Date: 2/7/2010 1:30:00 PM
Yes all true...what are your day dreams? Light & Love
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Date: 2/7/2010 1:31:00 AM
Mac, We are free to contemplate anthing we desire in our daydreams, how true and how inspiring is this message you convey in this wonderfully written poem! Blessings, Connie
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Date: 2/6/2010 8:35:00 PM
I love the statement that contentment "massages the soul" Wonderful poem Mac...Enjoyed...Marty
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Date: 2/6/2010 5:48:00 PM
SOUP MAIL...
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Date: 2/6/2010 5:24:00 PM
Imaginative and introspective at the same time Mac and your last two lines are the foundation of this "beauty"... I appreciate your comments and am quite flattered that u think of me as a master poet... u have been a refreshing bright light to this site.. hey .. that rhymes...luv.. "Sweetheart"
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