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It was fluid, softly palpatating at the same rhythm as my heartbeat. The orb was perfect in every way. Made of polygons too small for the naked eye to see, each one pulsing at exactly the same frequency, at the same instant. Capable of instantly knowing and feeling the same thought, each one as all the rest. To move, and shape, and seem to take on a mind of its own, yet always in tune with the master. Each aligned magnetically, their bond impervious to the most destructive of forces. They resist heat, pressure and corrosion, only bending to the will of the master. As I approached the orb my outstretched arm penetrates it easily. The polygons react so quickly, I feel nothing. I can pass to the inside without so much as a molecule of oxygen following. Inside, the iridescent glow of anti matter brightens as I slowly begin to amalgamate into the structure, each molecule designed and programmed to go to a specific place, to perform a specific task, all functioning equally efficient, expending energy to be replaced by the strange blue green aura emanating from another orb, a very small one, vibrating at multiple frequencies controlled by the loci of their constantly changing interrupts. Nothing seems to move except for the slight vibration of the small orb as the frequencies shift and change in odd behavior, producing a definite pattern of sounds. Slowly the larger orb brightens revealing plasmatic form and structure. Layer upon layer, deeper and deeper, the orb expands by the square of the exponent, until at last sitting alone in a vast wilderness of only darkness, I remove two small objects glowing - - - One from each pouch located on either cheek. As I bring them together slowly, a sudden flash of light takes on almost a solid form. “So, how was your day” she says, as I seated myself for supper. Dedicated to the little boy in me. May 2010 Charles Henderson

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Date: 6/12/2012 3:17:00 PM
hmmm this left me totally befuddled but surprisingly wanting more?? Give it a wee bit more structure Chas there's no distinct beginning? [and goodness what had he put in his mouth?] hmmmm Light & Love
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Charles Henderson
Date: 6/12/2012 7:06:00 PM
No, Deb, this is absolutely literal. Believe what your read. Is science fiction. He didn't put anything into his mouth, he has two pockets like a chip monk. Also it begins by describing the orb, which is his mode of transportation. He uses interdimensional travel. But of course, he is only daydreaming. Probably sitting on the couch.
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 6/12/2012 3:19:00 PM
if it is a metaphor for a drone or soldier and a hive with a Queen bee..you need some tweaking?
Date: 5/28/2012 10:35:00 AM
Like it, well written Charles. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 5/28/2012 10:35:00 AM
lovely imagery charles
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Date: 5/27/2012 11:35:00 AM
great Charles
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Date: 5/27/2012 8:03:00 AM
ha I wondered where this was going, I like..David
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