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Written April 24 2026

Daydream

Dandelion dreams blowing in wind
And I’m nodding off again
Yellow sun shining so bright
Doesn’t matter if it’s not night
Roses tickle my nose red
Eagerly sliding on frilly daybed
Amber yawn that state my peace
Mind is calm ready to softly sleep
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Greenhough Avatar
April 25, 2026 at 10:38 PM
I read this gently, softly, and in comfort of a relaxing afternoon.
Jones Avatar
April 26, 2026 at 2:56 AM
Thanks for reading Hilda.
Wolf Avatar
April 25, 2026 at 9:34 PM
So calm and soothing, Karen. YAWN...
Jones Avatar
April 26, 2026 at 2:55 AM
Thanks glad it soothes Gershon.
Delegans Avatar
April 25, 2026 at 3:06 PM
What a relaxing read. I can feel myself somewhere outside in the fresh air as I read this. Enjoyed very much, Karen!
Jones Avatar
April 26, 2026 at 2:54 AM
So glad you enjoyed Christopher! Thanks
George Avatar
April 24, 2026 at 9:51 PM
This state of calm when one is slipping into slumber is a sweet moment. We may not get it everytime. A lovely poem.
Jones Avatar
April 25, 2026 at 12:13 AM
Thank you dear Valsa!
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April 24, 2026 at 4:23 PM
A lovely way to spend the day Karen, enjoy the peace and the sleep… Beryl
Jones Avatar
April 24, 2026 at 4:35 PM
Thanks Beryl!
Goldsmith Avatar
April 24, 2026 at 1:50 PM
A wonderful write. I need a nap so I can daydream. Did you know, bunnies love to eat Dandelion??? Oh yes, Roses will tickle the nose. Have a lovely day/weekend writing away...........
Jones Avatar
April 24, 2026 at 2:24 PM
If I were a bunny I think I’d eat dandelions too! lol! Hope your nap was refreshing if you had one! Happy napping and then delighting with your writing!
Anaya Avatar
April 24, 2026 at 11:42 AM
Day dreams come true as well! "Dandilion dreams" you've already inspired me to write this morning, it'll be 'bout butterfly. Ty for sharing this gem~faving
Jones Avatar
April 24, 2026 at 2:22 PM
Wow I’m honored you faved and love that you’re inspired. I can’t wait to read your butterfly write!
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 24, 2026 at 11:27 AM
Hello Karen Jones, day dreaming I do often. When i do this i do not sleep. Yet it works for you to fall asleep. Hugs. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 24, 2026 at 4:00 PM
Hello Karen Jones, enjoy your weekend. Hugs. /Darlene/
Jones Avatar
April 24, 2026 at 2:20 PM
Hugs thanks for stopping by Darlene!
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