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Daybreak

watching the dawn pour out of the sky like a rose, colored piece of glass.

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Bill Baker

Date: 2/24/2024 9:59:00 PM

Lovely Haiku, Rose. A beautiful image comes to mind. Thank you for adding beauty to my day. Your poet friend in Texas, Bill

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/24/2024 9:18:00 AM

What a great tribute to the dawn.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 2/23/2024 7:58:00 AM

Dear Rose, Your haiku is a captivating portrayal of the beauty of dawn. The imagery you've created into just a few lines is truly mesmerizing. It captures the delicate yet vibrant essence of daybreak in a way that touches us the reader. Loved It! - Blessings, Daniel

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 2/23/2024 12:27:00 PM

Glad you appreciate the dawn too Daniel :)

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 2/23/2024 5:25:00 AM

what a delightful Haiku, sweet Rose. I was watching the dawn this morning from my office window; your poem captured it beautifully. Have a splendid day, hugs and take care of yourself, Sara

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 2/23/2024 12:26:00 PM

Glad you enjoyed a beautiful dawn this morning Sara ;)