Day and Night - Yalto Form

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Day and Night - Yalto Form Birdsong heard droplets of dew white clouds journeying sky and bright the sun shines cometh night stars glow moon beams light lovers live their dreams angels watch those beneath their wings slumbering in their beds till night fades to morning. *+*+* 20th December 2022 *+* Yalto is a form created by PoetrySoup member Edward Ibeh.

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/20/2022 11:33:00 AM

A wonderful write/picture. I love it. Have a blessed day.................

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/20/2022 5:47:00 PM

Thank you very much Paula, you have a lovely blessed day too… Belle

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 12/20/2022 1:02:00 AM

A fine poem with great imagery. Best for a win.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/20/2022 5:46:00 PM

Thank you Victor, though this Yalto though isn’t entered in a contest I appreciate your comments… Belle

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/19/2022 10:31:00 PM

Great imagery Belle, a shame Edwards form isn't on soups poetry forms list. Hope you have a happy Christmas and good health and happiness in the new year. Tom

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/20/2022 5:42:00 PM

Thank you Tom,I agree that the Yalto Edward created should be on the poetry forms list. Best wishes for Christmas and the new year, may it bring you good health and happiness too… Belle

Edward Ibeh

Date: 12/19/2022 9:15:00 PM

What a marvelous Yalto verse with wonderful imagery, Belle:-) Thoroughly enjoyed!

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/20/2022 5:36:00 PM

Thank you very much Edward, I enjoyed writing in the Yalto form that you created… Belle