Laura Mckenzie Poet Choka

Dawn's Music

Behind sheer curtains
Golden rays sing the day’s pulse
Grandeur to the beat of life

The ballad bows proud
Whistling in rhythm tango
Bird’s susurrant calm weeping

Hills and valleys hum
Sweet fields in lavender shades
Under a blue canopy

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P Sheart October 4, 2009 at 1:10 PM Hi Laura Congrats on this amazing poem!! Good luck in finals. Love Light Truth Patty

Robin L. Gass September 30, 2009 at 4:07 PM Congratulations Laura! You have penned such a beautiful Choka. This fills you with lovely images and a peaceful feeling! Best of luck in the finals! Love, Robin

Carolyn Devonshire September 24, 2009 at 1:12 PM Congratulations on making it through the first round of the poetry competition with two poems, Laura! Luck and love, Carolyn

James Fraser September 24, 2009 at 12:24 PM Laura, congratulations in getting past round one of the competition >> James

James Marshall Goff September 18, 2009 at 7:21 PM great form! great poem! Laura!...jim

Phyllis Babcock July 11, 2009 at 8:25 AM Congrats on your featured write. God Bless Phyl

Adeleke Adeite July 11, 2009 at 4:19 AM What a wonderful piece. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing & congratulations on your excelent piece being featured dis week. Great you Laura

Raul Moreno July 9, 2009 at 11:48 PM Laura, congrats on your feature...Raul

Sara Kendrick July 8, 2009 at 2:51 PM Love your poem and your descriptive talent. Sara

Carrie Richards July 6, 2009 at 3:12 PM Such a beautiful poem, Laura. A wonderful addition to the featured section this week!! :) Carrie

Heidie Buys July 6, 2009 at 1:30 PM Such a peaceful and gentle poem. Congratulations on being featured this week. love Heidie

James Fraser July 6, 2009 at 11:10 AM Congratulations on your featured poem, lovely poem Laura>>James

Carol Sunshine Brown July 6, 2009 at 6:55 AM Beautiful picture you painted here with your words Laura. Congratulations on your featured poem this week. May you have many more. Love, Carol

Brian Strand July 5, 2009 at 11:27 PM Congrats on your feature poem this week Laura.Rgds Brian

Ernilando Tugaff July 5, 2009 at 10:44 PM This is a beautiful, amazing and inspiring work deserve to be displayed. Congratulations. Ernilando

Jayne Eggins July 5, 2009 at 7:33 PM Lovely write Laura I am a singing teacher and musical poetry gets me everytime ... and congrates on spotlight as well another deserving piece Love Jayne x

April 29, 2009 at 4:22 PM Beautiful use of imagery for a multi-sense experience. Love the view. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind comment on my lanterne. Karen

Farah Chamma April 25, 2009 at 1:14 AM A great poem Laura...The images you pen are wonderful...Thank you for sharing.. Always, The young one, Farah

Trudy Diane Rider April 24, 2009 at 5:46 PM Such beautiful imagery Laura! Thank you for your comments on my Icicle poem also! ~Trudy~

L'Nass Shango April 22, 2009 at 8:27 AM A lyrically rich poem, full of delicious imagery ... the tongue drrols with them. Thanks for commenting on my poem, may you be ever blessed.

Brian Strand April 21, 2009 at 11:38 PM Thanks for your welcome comments today Laura.Rgds Brian

Brian Strand April 21, 2009 at 2:59 AM Best wishes with this one Laura.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Debbie Guzzi April 20, 2009 at 3:48 PM so serene! thank you for the gift. Light & Love

Sharon Winter April 20, 2009 at 8:51 AM So beautiful it doesn't seem real. Incredibly gorgeous, soft, gentle imagery. A soothing and peaceful visual. Good luck Laura. Love, Shar

Brian Strand April 20, 2009 at 2:04 AM Best wishes with this one Laura.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

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