Dawns Joyful Arc

Dawn’s Joyful Arc

The old bridge is gone
as is the rapid chatter
destiny’s wheels,
steel on steel progress
streaming a black ribbon
of hope’s hubris.

The river rose up –
a revolt against
the cold black film –
perhaps.  More likely
in self defense
as empty words
now filled the silence.

A swan sits upon
a mounded nest
eyeing the muskrat.
In the  mist
dawns joyful arc
bridges the river.


©10/23/2018

for – Rainbows Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Onclaud Avatar
November 12, 2018 at 1:21 PM
love the symbolism and diction of this wonderful work, john... best congrats!...huggs
Carmack Avatar
November 10, 2018 at 10:47 AM
Impressive. Congrats John.
Mitra Avatar
November 9, 2018 at 10:54 PM
Such a depth of words...Congrats for your win
Lawless Avatar
November 10, 2018 at 8:21 AM
Thank you Debjani, for stopping by to read and comment
Gauthier Avatar
November 9, 2018 at 10:12 PM
Congrats on your gold medal win, John. Beautifully penned.
Lawless Avatar
November 10, 2018 at 8:20 AM
Thank you Line. There is a "river" that flows through the Back Bay, Fens in Boston called, at least by us as children "The Muddy River"....I think it crept into this poem
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 9, 2018 at 9:55 PM
Your work is always so unique John. This piece is impressive and I see why it garnered the first placement! Congratulations! Brilliant writing my friend! : )
Lawless Avatar
November 10, 2018 at 8:17 AM
Thank you Connie, your comments and visits are always appreciated. A third grader once asked me "Do you know how to catch a unique bird"......the answer...."You "neek" up on it"
Cornish Avatar
November 9, 2018 at 6:44 PM
My favorite from the first read and stayed through many others, from the pen of one who's seen the old bridge go and new hopes arise.
Lawless Avatar
November 10, 2018 at 8:15 AM
Thank you so much for the placement of this poem. The idea of a "non-cliche" rainbow write set the muse wandering.
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