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Dawn's Delight

First rays of light announce the dawn; they dazzle in their interplay with frost still resting on the lawn. The heralds draw the curtain back, delicately announce the dawn, till all are bathed in light and lack the shadows of the night, now gone. A slow crescendo from the gray, the world goes spinning ever on, brings forth another wondrous day. Give praise, with joy, announce the dawn! ————— A Fold - 11 lines, with odd lines rhyming, and lines 1, 5, 11 using the same end phrase. No requirements for syllables or meter.

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Date: 1/18/2023 2:10:00 AM
I like it when a poem breaks into song, which this one did!
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