Notes About The Poem

Dawning of a New Romance

I longed to see Autumn's changing colors so I took a walk
along the winding tree lined path in beautiful Audubon Park
Golden leaves, edged in rust were tumbling to the ground
Then to a handsome face, my eyes were intently bound

He walked in my direction, his attention clearly not on me
His focus was on his canine, chasing a squirrel up a tree
I quickly jumped out of his way to avoid a certain collision
I laughed at the incident then he caught me in his vision

He looked as though he'd committed a most grievous sin
until he saw that I was laughing. I loved his boyish grin
I tried to act casual but my heart was beating like a drum
A drop of rain fell on my cheek. He dried it with his thumb.

It was a moment of inflection; with our eyes did we speak
We'd climbed a mountain, thrilled to have reached its peak
We lingered over coffee, talking easily through the morning
Windswept leaves were falling, but a romance was dawning

Autumn is a season that usually signals the finality of things,
the end of needed vacation days and wild Summer flings
But this Fall is special, for it's the beginning of a new love
An accidental meeting, the kind that movies are made of



9/22/17
Autumn Romance
host: Julie Rodeheaver
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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White Avatar
October 3, 2017 at 4:57 AM
Well deserved win, Lin :) For me Autumn is always the time os a sigh of relief, I hate the summer with all that heat and sleepless nights.
Smith Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 11:48 AM
Lovely Lin, I hope you were driven by experience, congratulations my dear...
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September 30, 2017 at 7:32 AM
Congratulations Lin! Love this pen :) xomo!
La France Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 6:30 PM
Lin, congratulations on your awesome win with this lovely love poem !
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 3:29 PM
Windswept leaves were falling, but a romance was dawning....I really love this line the most Lin. I can easily see why this has garnered first placement! I loved it! Congratulations! : )
Haight Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 11:35 AM
So romantic and well-written, Lin! Congratulations on your 1st place podium win. Hugs, Sandra
Sands Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 8:24 AM
Congratulations Lin ! :)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 12:38 AM
Congratulations, Lin. A lovely poem.
Barden Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 10:52 PM
Love this charming and whimsically romantic write, Lin, and I agree - Autumn always brings much excitement to one's heart, especially for me, as it was always school starting or college, and always new beginnings! (We have an Audubon Park near where I live in Maine, on the ocean - I love it there!). Blessings and congrats on this well-deserved win, my friend! :-) <3
Hamilton Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 9:55 PM
This is a wonderful love story, who knows maybe one day will be reality, great write, congrats on another great win!
Duet Avatar
September 23, 2017 at 12:40 AM
How very lovely this poem is! And, I loved the rhythm of it. It was like a little romantic movie in my mind as I read it.
Lane Avatar
September 23, 2017 at 1:27 PM
I like the way your mind works. Thanks so much, Carole.
Allison Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 5:04 PM
aww what a lovely romantic story Lin I thoroughly enjoyed my walk with you:-) hugs jan x
Lane Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 5:22 PM
Thanks for walking with me, Jan, and for liking this write.
Sands Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 3:56 PM
Very nice Lin. Sweet! Good luck in the contest :)
Lane Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 5:22 PM
Thanks very much, Heidi.
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