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I longed to see Autumn's changing colors so I took a walk along the winding tree lined path in beautiful Audubon Park Golden leaves, edged in rust were tumbling to the ground Then to a handsome face, my eyes were intently bound He walked in my direction, his attention clearly not on me His focus was on his canine, chasing a squirrel up a tree I quickly jumped out of his way to avoid a certain collision I laughed at the incident then he caught me in his vision He looked as though he'd committed a most grievous sin until he saw that I was laughing. I loved his boyish grin I tried to act casual but my heart was beating like a drum A drop of rain fell on my cheek. He dried it with his thumb. It was a moment of inflection; with our eyes did we speak We'd climbed a mountain, thrilled to have reached its peak We lingered over coffee, talking easily through the morning Windswept leaves were falling, but a romance was dawning Autumn is a season that usually signals the finality of things, the end of needed vacation days and wild Summer flings But this Fall is special, for it's the beginning of a new love An accidental meeting, the kind that movies are made of 9/22/17 Autumn Romance host: Julie Rodeheaver

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Date: 10/3/2017 4:57:00 AM
Well deserved win, Lin :) For me Autumn is always the time os a sigh of relief, I hate the summer with all that heat and sleepless nights.
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Date: 9/30/2017 11:48:00 AM
Lovely Lin, I hope you were driven by experience, congratulations my dear...
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Date: 9/30/2017 7:32:00 AM
Congratulations Lin! Love this pen :) xomo!
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Date: 9/29/2017 6:30:00 PM
Lin, congratulations on your awesome win with this lovely love poem !
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Date: 9/29/2017 3:29:00 PM
Windswept leaves were falling, but a romance was dawning....I really love this line the most Lin. I can easily see why this has garnered first placement! I loved it! Congratulations! : )
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Date: 9/29/2017 11:35:00 AM
So romantic and well-written, Lin! Congratulations on your 1st place podium win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 9/29/2017 8:24:00 AM
Congratulations Lin ! :)
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Date: 9/29/2017 12:38:00 AM
Congratulations, Lin. A lovely poem.
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Date: 9/28/2017 10:52:00 PM
Love this charming and whimsically romantic write, Lin, and I agree - Autumn always brings much excitement to one's heart, especially for me, as it was always school starting or college, and always new beginnings! (We have an Audubon Park near where I live in Maine, on the ocean - I love it there!). Blessings and congrats on this well-deserved win, my friend! :-) <3
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Date: 9/28/2017 9:55:00 PM
This is a wonderful love story, who knows maybe one day will be reality, great write, congrats on another great win!
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Date: 9/23/2017 12:40:00 AM
How very lovely this poem is! And, I loved the rhythm of it. It was like a little romantic movie in my mind as I read it.
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Date: 9/23/2017 1:27:00 PM
I like the way your mind works. Thanks so much, Carole.
Date: 9/22/2017 5:04:00 PM
aww what a lovely romantic story Lin I thoroughly enjoyed my walk with you:-) hugs jan x
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Date: 9/22/2017 5:22:00 PM
Thanks for walking with me, Jan, and for liking this write.
Date: 9/22/2017 3:56:00 PM
Very nice Lin. Sweet! Good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 9/22/2017 5:22:00 PM
Thanks very much, Heidi.

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