Dawn Wore

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dawn wore a red gown hoary topped old man hill .... iced birdbath skate rink

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/15/2023 4:19:00 PM

great image with that skate rink one!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/16/2023 4:02:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea. Imagine the fun that is if one skates. Sara

Joseph May

Date: 2/14/2023 10:51:00 AM

I like the depiction of a winter dawn as a skate rink and red gown, Very nicely done Sara, thanks for stopping by

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/14/2023 2:50:00 PM

I am glad that you liked this idea carried out in my poem. Thank you, Joseph. SK

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/14/2023 2:42:00 AM

Brilliant visions in this haiku.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/14/2023 8:59:00 AM

Your visits always add a bright thought to my day. Sara

Bill Baker

Date: 2/13/2023 2:12:00 PM

I like the imagery ... iced birdbath. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/14/2023 8:59:00 AM

Thank you, Bill. Your visits are delightful. Sara