Dawn On Mount Manaia

Only inspired mortals can feel the stimuli
            synonymously woven within the indigenous people
                      who for centuries dwell in this place.
                         The ‘Aotearoa Northland Maori’
                          Relating verbal legends of old
                     complementing one’s majestic stance
                            in the wilderness, a place 
         the ancient Gods of Olympus would welcome as home.
                 Here! From where one stands a perception
                   one of understanding yet in awe of you. 
                                        ‘Manaia’ 
                             Guardian of ‘Taurikura bay’
                    With your phantom shroud intimidating 
     the serene waters of the Pacific Ocean lying dormant below.
             Mortified your crag laden face appearing to cry out
                     for assistance to the wayward breeze,
          that it may hasten the removal of the ghostly grey veil,
              compounded precariously within your stony crown, 
   only then licence to permit the radiance of the brand new day to 
                     cast out the lingering nocturnal shadows, 
                           exposing all that surrounds your
                                  ‘Monolithic presence’

   © Harry J Horsman  2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Lamoureux Avatar
May 4, 2020 at 10:11 AM
It’s been four years since last I read this piece. It stands the test of time. ;0)
De Burca Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 8:21 PM
One of your best Harry, I enjoyed this so much gave it a well deserved 7.
Anish Avatar
August 1, 2016 at 11:47 PM
Sounds like you had a great experience. Where is this place located? Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
Horsman Avatar
August 2, 2016 at 8:55 AM
New Zealand, Matthew
Thirtyseven Avatar
July 31, 2016 at 9:22 AM
Mate you have brought back memories of a most beautiful country. And in the meantime you have captured one of the Pacific's moods superbly. Thanks.
Horne Avatar
July 30, 2016 at 2:42 PM
this is just wonderful stuff, Harry
Teagan Avatar
July 29, 2016 at 4:17 PM
you have an amazing way with words... this is awesome!
Hagy Avatar
July 23, 2016 at 2:17 PM
Beautiful imagery...great write!
Sathasivam Avatar
July 21, 2016 at 7:42 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
Gasun Avatar
July 20, 2016 at 1:43 AM
A beauty to behold and a very informative poem creatively woven my dear friend, harry. Thank you so much for sharing! love and hugs, Leonora
Wigley Avatar
July 19, 2016 at 11:43 PM
Your time there well spent, Harry, a proud piece. Regards, Viv
Eastman Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 10:44 AM
A very interesting piece to read... The Maori People are very popular to read about lately. Well done!
Lamoureux Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 7:36 AM
I find indigenous cultures to be fascinating, you have wet my appetite as I know little about the Maori People.
Trifiatis Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 4:44 AM
The soul of universal Man has spoken in the language of poetry that only the good in heart understand! Superb writing my friend Harry. Good luck and a seven!
Dietrich Avatar
July 17, 2016 at 5:07 PM
Wow. What an amazing job you did. You are at your beat writing strong and free, harry
Onclaud Avatar
July 17, 2016 at 4:37 PM
harry, well done with such greaat word choice!... i enjoyed this.. hugggs
Callus Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 5:16 PM
An excellent take on this inspiring theme, Harry. New Zealand has so many beautiful and captivating sights on offer! gl in the contest. Regards // paul
Andresen Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 8:15 AM
- Harry, thank you for this beautiful images of nature - Good luck in the contest - Best wishes for a peaceful weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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