Dawn On Mount Manaia

Only inspired mortals can feel the stimuli
            synonymously woven within the indigenous people
                      who for centuries dwell in this place.
                         The ‘Aotearoa Northland Maori’
                          Relating verbal legends of old
                     complementing one’s majestic stance
                            in the wilderness, a place 
         the ancient Gods of Olympus would welcome as home.
                 Here! From where one stands a perception
                   one of understanding yet in awe of you. 
                                        ‘Manaia’ 
                             Guardian of ‘Taurikura bay’
                    With your phantom shroud intimidating 
     the serene waters of the Pacific Ocean lying dormant below.
             Mortified your crag laden face appearing to cry out
                     for assistance to the wayward breeze,
          that it may hasten the removal of the ghostly grey veil,
              compounded precariously within your stony crown, 
   only then licence to permit the radiance of the brand new day to 
                     cast out the lingering nocturnal shadows, 
                           exposing all that surrounds your
                                  ‘Monolithic presence’

   © Harry J Horsman  2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 5/4/2020 10:11:00 AM
It’s been four years since last I read this piece. It stands the test of time. ;0)
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Date: 9/26/2016 8:21:00 PM
One of your best Harry, I enjoyed this so much gave it a well deserved 7.
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Date: 8/1/2016 11:47:00 PM
Sounds like you had a great experience. Where is this place located? Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 8/2/2016 8:55:00 AM
New Zealand, Matthew
Date: 7/31/2016 9:22:00 AM
Mate you have brought back memories of a most beautiful country. And in the meantime you have captured one of the Pacific's moods superbly. Thanks.
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Date: 7/30/2016 2:42:00 PM
this is just wonderful stuff, Harry
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Date: 7/29/2016 4:17:00 PM
you have an amazing way with words... this is awesome!
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Date: 7/23/2016 2:17:00 PM
Beautiful imagery...great write!
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Date: 7/21/2016 7:42:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 7/20/2016 1:43:00 AM
A beauty to behold and a very informative poem creatively woven my dear friend, harry. Thank you so much for sharing! love and hugs, Leonora
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Date: 7/19/2016 11:43:00 PM
Your time there well spent, Harry, a proud piece. Regards, Viv
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Date: 7/18/2016 10:44:00 AM
A very interesting piece to read... The Maori People are very popular to read about lately. Well done!
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Date: 7/18/2016 7:36:00 AM
I find indigenous cultures to be fascinating, you have wet my appetite as I know little about the Maori People.
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Date: 7/18/2016 4:44:00 AM
The soul of universal Man has spoken in the language of poetry that only the good in heart understand! Superb writing my friend Harry. Good luck and a seven!
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Date: 7/17/2016 5:07:00 PM
Wow. What an amazing job you did. You are at your beat writing strong and free, harry
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Date: 7/17/2016 4:37:00 PM
harry, well done with such greaat word choice!... i enjoyed this.. hugggs
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Date: 7/16/2016 5:16:00 PM
An excellent take on this inspiring theme, Harry. New Zealand has so many beautiful and captivating sights on offer! gl in the contest. Regards // paul
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Date: 7/16/2016 8:15:00 AM
- Harry, thank you for this beautiful images of nature - Good luck in the contest - Best wishes for a peaceful weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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