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Dawn of Empowerment

The fresh morning air, crisp, wet, fragrant, alive delivers a shock to the sleeping mind waking the senses coming out of a drowsy yawn the new day dawns with vibrant colors echoing the motivation for change in my soul bright reds and golds warm the chilled, dew covered earth with the promise of tenderness and love the rising sun itself strengthens the resolve made in the darkness of night to grasp onto life to live it! To Love it! Not to let anymore of it pass by with pessimistic lethargy a brand new day has begun breathe in the vigor, feel the promise, live the power!

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Date: 6/4/2010 5:43:00 PM
Gives one reason to hope. Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen
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Date: 6/4/2010 2:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Trudy. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/23/2009 3:33:00 PM
Powerful write of encouragement and hope here, Trudy. Thanks for the reminder that its up to me to set the tone for the day ... smile ... been awhile since you've posted here at the Soup. Hope you come back with more great writing soon!!
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Date: 5/19/2009 1:09:00 PM
Thank you, I needed that..was having a blue day. Light & Love
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Date: 5/17/2009 9:28:00 AM
This is truly beautiful, the image wonderful, yes each brand new day, is a promise and a gift, well written
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Date: 5/12/2009 1:41:00 PM
Dear Trudy, so sorry I ever missed this! I should print this out and hang it right by my computer to read every day to inspire me to do just as you so beautifully write! It is a crime indeed to let any of the undeniable beauty that surrounds us pass us by! Powerful! Love, Shar
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Date: 4/30/2009 1:53:00 PM
Great piece that will surely motivate others to move and to think and to feel; just as you have motivated me with this challenge! Well done, Trudy! Donna
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Date: 4/30/2009 1:31:00 PM
I love your upbeat approach to life and your appreciation for things we take for granted -- fresh air, colorful sunrises and all of nature's beauty. What a great poem, Tudy!
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Date: 4/26/2009 11:33:00 PM
One to read at the star of each day Trudy.Rgds Brian
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Date: 4/26/2009 12:36:00 PM
Ride on! Light & Love
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