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Dawn by the Mountainside

As the last thread of darkness bids farewell, it took a swipe at their peaks, A thick coat of mist casts a wet blanket over their faces and swiftly leaves, Then, out comes the glow of Dawn’s first golden rays cascading warmth all over them, Giant guardians of the earth, through it all, the mountains stood in silence, Dawn by the Mountainside, both beautiful and harsh, taught me a lesson in patience and endurance. As the world awakes, songbirds herald in the break of a new day, A gentle wind begins to stir, caressing everything in its way, Leaves from the valley's tall trees made a soft musical sound, And the sunlight glistened as it danced across the winding river, Oh, dawn by the mountainside is full of treasures I’m blessed to have found. In nature’s open space of solitude and serenity, worries melt away, And hearts can find peace in the graceful beauty of its view, So, walk by where the mountains stand in the early morn, For dawn by the Mountainside, refreshes the soul and ignites the fire in the heart, making you feel alive and spankingly anew. by Zyrool

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Date: 5/15/2025 9:55:00 AM
Beautiful, I can respect this because I think as I said before, I live in the mountains. :) A worthy tribute to our enduring mountains -
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 5/16/2025 6:06:00 AM
Hi Paige, thank you so much for your lovely words. You’re so blessed to be living in such a beautiful site. Enjoy your day.
Date: 4/21/2025 9:46:00 AM
There is great beauty in your poem. Imagery all around. Well written.
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 4/21/2025 11:38:00 AM
Hello Victor, thank you so much. Wishing you a wonderful new week ahead my friend.
Date: 4/20/2025 7:50:00 AM
Dear Zyrool, your appreciation for the Mountainside is beautifully expressed through your exquisite imageries that "refreshes the soul and ignites the fire in the heart" making me "feel alive and spankingly anew." The vivid scene you poetically create brings me there "where the mountains stand" with ease and I adore the view. Simply beautiful poetry my dear friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Susan Ashley
Date: 4/20/2025 9:18:00 AM
Thank you, Zyrool. Happy Easter to you and yours too, my poet friend.
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 4/20/2025 8:36:00 AM
Hello Susan, thank you so much for the visit and your lovely words. Sending the Lord’s Blessings to you on this beautiful day, Happy Easter Sunday to you, my friend.
Date: 4/17/2025 11:11:00 PM
Dear Zyrool, your poem is so beautiful and refreshing as the lovely dawn of your description. You have included all that delights one's mind and revives one's mood. Greatly enjoyed.
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 4/18/2025 2:03:00 AM
Hello Valsa, thank you so much for your lovely words. Wishing you a fabulous day and wonderful Easter weekend my poet friend. Stay blessed.
Date: 4/16/2025 12:57:00 PM
- A pleasure to read ... you describe this with love ... creates a beautiful picture of this peaceful nature - I wish you a blessed and lovely Easter weekend, Zyrool :) - hugs
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 4/16/2025 11:44:00 PM
Hello Anne-Lise, thank you for the read and your beautiful words.Means a lot. Sending Blessings and wishing you a fabulous Easter Weekend, my friend.
Date: 4/14/2025 10:51:00 PM
A beautiful and tender poem...The imagery is stunning with your great use of words...
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 4/14/2025 11:33:00 PM
Hello SO, thank you for dropping by and for leaving these beautiful words.Greatly appreciated. Sending Blessings your way my friend. Have an amazing new week ahead.
Date: 4/14/2025 10:52:00 AM
Hello Zyrool, a dawn by the mountain sdie. or sunset by the mountainside. Are both beautiful to see. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/19/2025 2:49:00 PM
Hello Zyrool, thank you zyrool, i want you to know that i am sick. i have been sick now going on the 4th week. I thought i had a very bad cold. I went to my doctor and it turns out i have a virus. I 'm on 3 meds. Hugs. /Darlene/Happy Easter. /Darlene/
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 4/14/2025 11:30:00 PM
Hello Darlene thank you for the read. I agree both are beautiful. Wishing you a wonderful new week ahead my friend. Stay Blessed.
Date: 4/14/2025 10:48:00 AM
Dear Zyrool, Reading this makes me feel alive and so lively, i see through your very descriptive metaphors and how vividly youv painted imagery here, so soothing and captivating makes my soul quiver too! Absolutely gorgeous! I especially love “And the sunlight glistened as it danced across the winding river, Oh, dawn by the mountainside is full of treasures I’m blessed to have found.” Just stunning!!! Seamless flow to your word weaving too! Definitely a new fave for me!Sending you light always
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 4/14/2025 11:28:00 PM
Hello IE, Thank you so much for your beautiful words, means a lot. Sending Blessings your way and wishing you a fabulous new week ahead, my friend.

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