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Dawn Becomes Electric

Signs in the well worn path led us to the dark angel side of forever If 'you feel like watching as dawn become electric follow us towards the shining signs of reality Did you not know that eyes which have seen sorrow may soon fill with tears Yes, and the masters] know that reality is malleable. are you ready to face the truth? and are you ready to feel the joy which is coming your way?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/18/2015 12:38:00 PM
Yes, ready for the joy. .Enjoyed reading your work..Sara
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Date: 2/17/2015 11:36:00 PM
Hey, Matt, I am TRYING to stay creative but just no time for writing. it really bums me out. So glad my state is not cold this year like out east!!
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Date: 2/16/2015 9:34:00 PM
Eyes which have seen sorrow certainly can also cry when they see beauty, and the wonders of nature can be electrifying at times! I really enjoyed your beautiful poem, Matthew. Very nicely written!
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Matthew Anish
Date: 2/16/2015 9:48:00 PM
Thank you very much for your kind words. My chapbook is being reviewed soon. Hope you are happy and well and keep up the fine words. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Date: 2/16/2015 8:27:00 AM
Wow a unique poem and worded in a poetic realistic way. Thumbs up!
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Date: 2/15/2015 6:00:00 PM
Hey, Matt, I sure do HOPE a lady wins the next election!!! Do you have any poems in your lineup I have not seen. i couldn't find any just now.
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Date: 2/14/2015 12:44:00 PM
Your emotions and wit wrap themselves around your words giving them strength and depth and we are left wanting more.
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Date: 2/14/2015 1:07:00 AM
Wonderful Ballad Matthew, :)Have yourself a sweet valentine's Day. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 2/11/2015 6:10:00 PM
I LIKES it. electric dawn!!
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Date: 2/11/2015 6:09:00 PM
about what you said on my cat poem. Geez, Matt, I even had fish die on me!!
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