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diamond dewdrops glisten on gossamer threads morning has broken 23rd May 2016

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Valerie Staton

Date: 1/25/2019 8:41:00 AM

Enjoyed this poem immensely.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/1/2016 10:29:00 PM

gosh, how did I ever miss this one, Jan? It's like number 21 on best poems list WAy to go!!

Jan Allison
Date: 6/5/2016 1:30:00 PM

No way Andrea lol:-):-) I rarely look at that list these days - it does not necessarily reflect the quality of a poem simply the number of favourites given:-( hugs Jan xx

Sneha Rv

Date: 5/27/2016 1:46:00 PM

This is so beautiful, dear Jan!! You write in all forms so wonderfully.. :-) :)

Jan Allison
Date: 5/29/2016 3:30:00 PM

Thanks so much Sneha:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 5/25/2016 10:45:00 AM

Beautiful imagery and haiku...well done!! hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 5/25/2016 11:48:00 AM

Thanks Paul I wrote this just for fun and am very pleased with the way it turned out:-) hugs Jan xx

Casarah Nance

Date: 5/24/2016 6:00:00 PM

love it!

Jan Allison
Date: 5/24/2016 6:08:00 PM

Thanks Cas just a fun write:-) hugs jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/24/2016 5:30:00 PM

Ahhhh this is lovely Jan! Like a bejeweled necklace of diamonds, your imagery stands out with this picture that so enhances your haiku. #7. ; )

Jan Allison
Date: 5/24/2016 5:46:00 PM

Thanks Connie I write my poems then search for a suitable image:-) hugs Jan xx

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 5/24/2016 4:35:00 PM

Gorgeous imagery Jan, and outstanding language. Well done indeed!! hugs, Keith

Jan Allison
Date: 5/24/2016 5:45:00 PM

Thanks Keith just a fun write:-) hugs Jan xx

Janis Thompson

Date: 5/24/2016 2:42:00 PM

Lovely.....

Jan Allison
Date: 5/24/2016 3:18:00 PM

Thanks Janis:-) hugs Jan xx

Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 5/24/2016 2:03:00 PM

Beautiful haiku, Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/24/2016 3:17:00 PM

Thanks Lenny:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 5/24/2016 11:39:00 AM

Beautiful poem, Jan. :) Eve

Jan Allison
Date: 5/24/2016 3:17:00 PM

Thanks so much Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Jean Murray

Date: 5/24/2016 9:20:00 AM

What a beautiful morning it is Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/24/2016 11:18:00 AM

It was a gorgeous morning the sunrise was beautiful:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/24/2016 2:43:00 AM

- A beautiful picture,Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 5/24/2016 8:46:00 AM

Thanks Anne Lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/23/2016 10:23:00 PM

seeing the photo first, I was curious, and well done, loved this Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 5/24/2016 8:47:00 AM

Thanks Arthur - talking of photo's I have my ex bro in law's portfolio to look through and use - he is an amazing photographer and I will start using his pics with my poems soon its just going to be so hard to know where to start though:-) hugs Jan xx