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diamond dewdrops glisten on gossamer threads morning has broken 23rd May 2016

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Date: 1/25/2019 8:41:00 AM
Enjoyed this poem immensely.
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Date: 6/1/2016 10:29:00 PM
gosh, how did I ever miss this one, Jan? It's like number 21 on best poems list WAy to go!!
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Date: 6/5/2016 1:30:00 PM
No way Andrea lol:-):-) I rarely look at that list these days - it does not necessarily reflect the quality of a poem simply the number of favourites given:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/27/2016 1:46:00 PM
This is so beautiful, dear Jan!! You write in all forms so wonderfully.. :-) :)
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Date: 5/29/2016 3:30:00 PM
Thanks so much Sneha:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/25/2016 10:45:00 AM
Beautiful imagery and haiku...well done!! hugs // paul
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Date: 5/25/2016 11:48:00 AM
Thanks Paul I wrote this just for fun and am very pleased with the way it turned out:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/24/2016 6:00:00 PM
love it!
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Date: 5/24/2016 6:08:00 PM
Thanks Cas just a fun write:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 5/24/2016 5:30:00 PM
Ahhhh this is lovely Jan! Like a bejeweled necklace of diamonds, your imagery stands out with this picture that so enhances your haiku. #7. ; )
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Date: 5/24/2016 5:46:00 PM
Thanks Connie I write my poems then search for a suitable image:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/24/2016 4:35:00 PM
Gorgeous imagery Jan, and outstanding language. Well done indeed!! hugs, Keith
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Date: 5/24/2016 5:45:00 PM
Thanks Keith just a fun write:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/24/2016 2:42:00 PM
Lovely.....
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Date: 5/24/2016 3:18:00 PM
Thanks Janis:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/24/2016 2:03:00 PM
Beautiful haiku, Jan.
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Date: 5/24/2016 3:17:00 PM
Thanks Lenny:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/24/2016 11:39:00 AM
Beautiful poem, Jan. :) Eve
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Date: 5/24/2016 3:17:00 PM
Thanks so much Eve:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/24/2016 9:20:00 AM
What a beautiful morning it is Jan.
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Date: 5/24/2016 11:18:00 AM
It was a gorgeous morning the sunrise was beautiful:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/24/2016 2:43:00 AM
- A beautiful picture,Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/24/2016 8:46:00 AM
Thanks Anne Lise:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/23/2016 10:23:00 PM
seeing the photo first, I was curious, and well done, loved this Jan!
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Date: 5/24/2016 8:47:00 AM
Thanks Arthur - talking of photo's I have my ex bro in law's portfolio to look through and use - he is an amazing photographer and I will start using his pics with my poems soon its just going to be so hard to know where to start though:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/23/2016 9:39:00 PM
Such a beautiful image your poem has given me in just three short lines... Nicely penned, Jan!
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Date: 5/24/2016 8:47:00 AM
Thanks so much Kelly:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/23/2016 8:21:00 PM
Ah this is nice Jan. The morning dew is so inspiring.
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Date: 5/24/2016 8:47:00 AM
Thanks Tim it is a beautiful time of day:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/23/2016 6:26:00 PM
Beautiful Haiku with great visuals Jan
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Date: 5/24/2016 8:49:00 AM
thanks Brian:-) hugs Jan xx