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Dawn

diamond dewdrops
glisten on gossamer threads
morning has broken

23rd May 2016

daymorningsunhaiku

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Valerie Staton

January 25, 2019 at 8:41 AM

Enjoyed this poem immensely.

Andrea Dietrich

June 1, 2016 at 10:29 PM

gosh, how did I ever miss this one, Jan? It's like number 21 on best poems list WAy to go!!

Jan Allison

June 5, 2016 at 1:30 PM

No way Andrea lol:-):-) I rarely look at that list these days - it does not necessarily reflect the quality of a poem simply the number of favourites given:-( hugs Jan xx

Sneha Rv

May 27, 2016 at 1:46 PM

This is so beautiful, dear Jan!! You write in all forms so wonderfully.. :-) :)

Jan Allison

May 29, 2016 at 3:30 PM

Thanks so much Sneha:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

May 25, 2016 at 10:45 AM

Beautiful imagery and haiku...well done!! hugs // paul

Jan Allison

May 25, 2016 at 11:48 AM

Thanks Paul I wrote this just for fun and am very pleased with the way it turned out:-) hugs Jan xx

Casarah Nance

May 24, 2016 at 6:00 PM

love it!

Jan Allison

May 24, 2016 at 6:08 PM

Thanks Cas just a fun write:-) hugs jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

May 24, 2016 at 5:30 PM

Ahhhh this is lovely Jan! Like a bejeweled necklace of diamonds, your imagery stands out with this picture that so enhances your haiku. #7. ; )

Jan Allison

May 24, 2016 at 5:46 PM

Thanks Connie I write my poems then search for a suitable image:-) hugs Jan xx

Keith Bickerstaffe

May 24, 2016 at 4:35 PM

Gorgeous imagery Jan, and outstanding language. Well done indeed!! hugs, Keith

Jan Allison

May 24, 2016 at 5:45 PM

Thanks Keith just a fun write:-) hugs Jan xx

Janis Medders Tobechi

May 24, 2016 at 2:42 PM

Lovely.....

Jan Allison

May 24, 2016 at 3:18 PM

Thanks Janis:-) hugs Jan xx

Lenny Gazbowski

May 24, 2016 at 2:03 PM

Beautiful haiku, Jan.

Jan Allison

May 24, 2016 at 3:17 PM

Thanks Lenny:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

May 24, 2016 at 11:39 AM

Beautiful poem, Jan. :) Eve

Jan Allison

May 24, 2016 at 3:17 PM

Thanks so much Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Jean Murray

May 24, 2016 at 9:20 AM

What a beautiful morning it is Jan.

Jan Allison

May 24, 2016 at 11:18 AM

It was a gorgeous morning the sunrise was beautiful:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 24, 2016 at 2:43 AM

- A beautiful picture,Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

May 24, 2016 at 8:46 AM

Thanks Anne Lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso

May 23, 2016 at 10:23 PM

seeing the photo first, I was curious, and well done, loved this Jan!

Jan Allison

May 24, 2016 at 8:47 AM

Thanks Arthur - talking of photo's I have my ex bro in law's portfolio to look through and use - he is an amazing photographer and I will start using his pics with my poems soon its just going to be so hard to know where to start though:-) hugs Jan xx