Dawn

The orchestral chorus of waking birds fill the air
In augmentation of dawns awakening flare.
Sunrise paints the sky with colored wonder, golds, 
Vibrant red and hues shaded soft, reminisce of old.

Dusty, cracked leather boots lay on the verandah porch 
The farmhouse kitchen now awakes, toasted bread to scorch.
Creaking back door hinges sing, old tea leaves tossed from the pot.
The kettle boils, butter melts, the coarse of the day to plot.

Light is the breeze that casts its fingers through the windmills blade,
The comforting sound of scraping metal, ritualistically made.
Dog stirs, stretches sleek body, mouth wide with a waking yawn.
All of nature comes alive at the sight of such a beautiful dawn.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Kendrick Avatar
March 30, 2021 at 2:13 PM
Very descriptive and expressive work. I got an Ahhh! at the end thinking about dawn's first light that I enjoy. Sara
DiMino Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 11:23 AM
Back to basics in both poetry and dawns. Outstanding imagery and heartfelt sensibility. This was a nostalgic treat to read. Thank you.
Smith Avatar
January 14, 2018 at 4:51 AM
It has been a while. Don't think I commented on this one which puts Australia 1 up on NZ. have you thought of moving this side of the ditch. All kiwis holding their breath re great run by black caps. Hope we can beat the poms. Hope you have something more to give us in 2018. Fondest regards from this side of the ditch.
Roberts Avatar
November 5, 2017 at 4:06 AM
I also always loved screened doors and the aromatic breezes that flow through the door and heart simotaneously . A lovely write :)
Enriquez Avatar
October 26, 2017 at 10:23 AM
Dear Old Man Emu: A very nice take here. Leon
Hamilton Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 2:56 AM
Lovely imagery felt like I was there, a wonderful write dear poet!
Emu Avatar
October 14, 2017 at 4:26 PM
Thank you john
Buck Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 2:31 PM
For some reason that took me back to breakfast at an Amish home years ago when I worked among them in N.E. Iowa. If you don't get there early, you're too late. :o) Those were the days my friend, we thought they'd never end. I fear they may be near that end. Thanks for sharing your work with all of us on the soup. oldbuck
Emu Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 1:33 PM
Thank you. Sounds like an interesting time.
Roberts Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 9:05 AM
Always loved a screen door. GOOD MORNING
Emu Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 3:44 AM
Good morning Donna, thanks for the visit.
Sathasivam Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 7:47 AM
Excellent. A great description of an awakening a beautiful day. Thanks for sharing it.
Emu Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 3:02 PM
Cheers Ravi, appreciate your visit.
Rv Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 3:18 AM
Oh this is beautiful; it flows so well and the imagery is so real. I love how simple and peaceful this is :)
Emu Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 3:02 PM
Thank you for you visit and kind words.
Allison Avatar
September 16, 2017 at 4:51 PM
what wonderful imagery to bring us the dawning of a new day:-) Thanks for sharing Craig:-) hugs jan xx
Emu Avatar
September 16, 2017 at 8:16 PM
Thank you Jan, appreciate these still quiet mornings.
Shaw Avatar
September 16, 2017 at 11:27 AM
Another brilliant write "Craig" - I don't know if you chose the picture first or the words - either way felt it all the way - Mind my bones creaked a bit like those hinges . . . ; )
Emu Avatar
September 16, 2017 at 8:17 PM
I must fix those hinges! My cousin took the photo and I wrote around it. Cheers Indiana for the visit.
One Avatar
September 15, 2017 at 10:21 AM
awesome imagery.. great first line... excellent write..
Emu Avatar
September 16, 2017 at 8:10 PM
Thanks Silent one. Appreciate the visit
Anish Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 2:51 PM
You are only as old as you feel. Remember Bob Dylan wrote a song called "Forever Young" Fine tribute to morning in this poem! Yours Matthew Anish
Emu Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 11:11 PM
Thank you Matthew, appreciate your visit.
Andresen Avatar
September 13, 2017 at 5:06 AM
- A beautiful way to meet a new day ... with the sounds and image we love - Enjoy this poem, Chris :) - hugs // Anne-Lise
Emu Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 1:05 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise.
Roper Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 5:12 PM
Imagery is wonderful,Old Man Emu, the photo you have choose is stunning. Hugs Eve ~`*
Emu Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 6:04 PM
Thank you Eve, the photo was taken by my cousin, her hobby,
Cresswell Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 9:49 AM
A Lovely glance into another experience of their life. Thank you for allowing me in even so briefly.
Emu Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 6:06 PM
My pleasure Patricia, Always welcome with a fresh pot of tea.
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