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Dawn

She peers out dark horizons Anticipation in the air Hints of orange magenta awaken now from their lair Retreating stars give way, to fiery streaks in bold relief Her lucent halo bejewels the sky ~ O come rejoice at light's motif

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Date: 3/24/2022 8:22:00 AM
Ah, the early morning delight! Enjoyed the imagery and the inviting start to a new day. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us. Write On! my friend, Bill
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Date: 3/21/2022 10:39:00 PM
Lovely penning of the emerging dawn, viewed with the eyes of a poet !
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Date: 3/21/2022 7:08:00 PM
Well done, my friend. I hope you are doing well.. Blessings and hugs
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Date: 3/21/2022 6:22:00 PM
A nature lover's embrace, filled with poise and grace. An elegant write G.W.!!...ab
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Date: 3/21/2022 5:40:00 PM
A beautiful concise summation of the dawn. Enjoyed your poem.
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Date: 3/21/2022 12:40:00 PM
Love especially those last two lines!
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Date: 3/21/2022 12:01:00 PM
Beautifully written Gershon. Happy Monday :)
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Date: 3/21/2022 11:29:00 AM
Sweet! Very, very nice images
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Date: 3/21/2022 11:12:00 AM
I really like the hues and the symbolism in this masterpiece. Gershon, your wording is just great. Have a wonderful Monday.
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