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Dawn

the dawn is veiled grey and foggy air embraces all . . . a hidden chirp drifts _______________________ September 4, 2019 Poetry/Haiku/dawn Copyright Protected, ID 19-1221-128-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to Strand Choice 12 Contest sponsor, Brian Strand Second Place

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Date: 2/1/2020 4:46:00 PM
Wow, a stunning haiku, Constance!:-) Heartiest congratulations on your top win!
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Date: 2/3/2020 8:40:00 AM
Edward, thanks for the compliment and the congratulations _Constance
Date: 1/31/2020 10:41:00 PM
I love the way the cheerful sound breaks through the gloom. Very nice and good luck in the contest. :)
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Date: 2/3/2020 8:40:00 AM
Evelyn, thanks for visiting with the sweet comment _Constance

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