Dawn

Night suffers winter freeze,
waning stars bejewel the dew 
on crowned grass at dawn.
Night dies moonless,
last breath makes the mist
you melt rising like the sun.

June 21, 2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Ashley Avatar
June 24, 2019 at 9:12 PM
Beautiful and captivating imagery, Subimal. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Mcgee Avatar
June 21, 2019 at 2:42 PM
my favorite..."last breath makes the mist, you melt rising like the sun" Just so beautiful. Congrats. Jeanne
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