Daver Austin

.                                              A wanna be Limerick


Limerick ride needing no joystick.
Daver your comments get me homesick.
Wishing I was with my homeboys in Boston!
Lace Maryjane, a condition you gave me, Mr.Austin!
Hope my riddles never get you brainsick.


.                                             A wanna be Haiku

.                                               Contract on P.D.
.                                        Go get a hold of Don__?___
.                                             GOOD spirit DAVER



I also confiscated an old antique or two.
Unique skills found in their retired war shoes.
(awe you where in my poetry police #1)
From: P.D.
Dedicated to:Daver Austin
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Yvonne Avatar
September 17, 2014 at 3:05 PM
Just another great write.
Davis Avatar
November 16, 2013 at 12:11 PM
PD This is a cute and clever write. Don't know who this poet is, but you have penned a nice funny ode to him. Hugs
K. Avatar
July 7, 2010 at 11:04 PM
going back to this again--thanks to Andrea, I am getting to know Daver's talent and wit! Very cool tribute to him pd--any new writes lately? Maybe our Muses went shopping or something??????? lol well enjoy your day!! --nikko :)
Boy Avatar
June 15, 2010 at 8:33 PM
kool stuff B.boy
Spence Sr Avatar
June 14, 2010 at 8:54 AM
This is really funny. The last line is my favorite. I have known many in that category. Great job! Joseph
Culverhouse Avatar
June 14, 2010 at 7:35 AM
cute poem--Great tribute to Daver.
Dietrich Avatar
June 13, 2010 at 11:43 PM
P.D. It is cool seeing you write about Daver. He is a really cool dude here even though he is even older than folks like me. hahaha. (Daver, if you read this, you know me, just kidding around). And I hope you didn't mind my teasing about you in my blog, Sydney. I really appreciate you here and your commenting to my blogs and poetry. keep up on your limericks!! LUv, Andrea
Harrison Avatar
June 13, 2010 at 6:45 PM
Very cute.
Murphy Avatar
June 13, 2010 at 12:23 PM
very very funny wonderful limerick and haiku and thanks so much for your kind comments hope your having a great weekend faleshia
A  Avatar
June 13, 2010 at 11:41 AM
A JOYSTICK LIMERICK RIDE. LOVED IT.-SKAT
Sweetheart Avatar
June 13, 2010 at 11:35 AM
Great Limerick P.D. BBF and Boston.. well go Celtics ... I am a sports nut so I will cheer for your home team yet New York is my team capital of the world.... Yankees, Mets, Jets, Giants, u name it ..if it says NYC...it part of your BBF "Sweetheart"
Keogh Jr. Avatar
June 13, 2010 at 10:11 AM
I like the way you lay it out there, consequences be damned! It's very foolhardy and very brave. I admire your audacity. You are more daring than I am. Regards and thanks! Gerard.
Kapoor Avatar
June 13, 2010 at 10:03 AM
In your brilliant style you have penned here a notorious and funny write very skillfully. Many thanks for your precious comments on Patradoot. Love and best wishes....Ravindra.....Poet
Dufresne Avatar
June 13, 2010 at 6:20 AM
ahh! a tribute to to our good friend and outstanding poet, -Daver! Love that guy! robert
Kendrick Avatar
June 13, 2010 at 4:46 AM
Interesting thoughts that you have penned..All in fun and humor?..Sara
Chachere Avatar
June 12, 2010 at 10:21 PM
cograts on your two pages of poetry P.D.! i noticed!! it took me over a year.haha. a limerick with no joystick!awesome! and of course, thats what im doing, im reading all of your new posts.when do i ever fail to do so Sid?theres so much entertainment.lol ~Always&Forever Lynette
K. Avatar
June 12, 2010 at 6:38 PM
hi there p.d.! really cool titles for your limerick & haiku here ;) enjoyed reading both! & trying to enjoy the PM as much as I can in 2 days--won't be able to spend much time here, that's why--haha I'm having Soup for breakfast ;) so how's that Chris slam going??
Rhinem Avatar
June 12, 2010 at 5:18 PM
...Smile, I shall return to spend a moment in time with "Your Splendors" later this day dear lady----for, I noticed some very creative and even profoundly depthful verses of Yours here lately...."My Love & Warmth To You, Always," John! ~ Smile, see You at the midnight moors bewitchings hour ~ Smile ~ "Bye Dear!":) ~
Rhinem Avatar
June 12, 2010 at 5:14 PM
Smile! I love Daver you know; for, his has such gentle and lovely heart in him, dear lady!! Smile, "Hello Precious & Lovely Sidney LeeAnn!!" ~ Smile, you know I have been reading Your Gifted words here lately; just haven't seemed to perhaps be willing or maybe desiring, to jump full bore into Soup as of yet dear; nine months away and, just kind of kicking it around an old spot right now; although ~ Smile ~ it seems a tad bit CRAZY sometimes....Smile? ~ Cont ~
Austin Avatar
June 12, 2010 at 12:03 PM
You've hit it, Destroyer! Next week I go to work for Walter Lantz. Previously with Leon Schlesinger. Ebada, ebada, ebada, that's all folks. Thanking you much for including me in your notorious lineup. Love, daver
Keys Avatar
June 12, 2010 at 9:13 AM
another Sidney LeeAnn mystery ... hmm; i like it but now i want more. as usual, your amigo, chuck
Knop Avatar
June 12, 2010 at 9:06 AM
Liked your "Wanna be Limerick and your wanna be Haiku" P.D.! What's your job in the restaurant and what kind of restaurant is it? Sorry to be so inquisitive!!! If I would have the money to do so I would open up a restaurant with international cookery (or better. with new international cookery). Keep writing and thank you for your comments...Have a nice and peaceful weekend my friend!...Gert
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