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Daughter To Father

Daddy where are you I don't understand I look to see a void in my hand I quickly bury my head in the sand Daddy where are u I don't understand But I'm rough and tough therefore I am grand. Daddy where are you I don't understand What happened back then did u even try Did you give me away or did they have to pry Daddy where are u I don't understand But I'm rough and tough therefore I won't cry Daddy where are you I don't understand Is that you that I see in the sand I look up there's no void in my hand Daddy I found you and I understand NOW I'm rough and tough and I am grand

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/1/2015 4:40:00 PM

A heartfelt poem, Dave, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy being part of the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, "In The Moment" in hopes it inspires you to write again. I look forward in following you and your poetry:) Enjoy this site, and the coming New Year! From: your new poet friend@-> LINDA <-@

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/1/2015 1:07:00 PM

- Warm welcome P- Soup, Dave .... first day of the new year 2015! - A lovely and moving poem from you! - I wish you Happy New Year !!!- oxox // Anne-Lise :)