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Daughter of Oak and Ash

For good, the Druid woods claimed this girl child for its own;
nymphs named the silk-skinned, raven-black of her, Fianna.
This night, she’s hurt hunting demons in her mother’s grove.
She recalls, her fright at five, abandoned in these woods alone.

Nymphs named the silk skinned, raven-black of her, Fianna,
by-blow of a Moor, left as dross in these weird weeping;
she recalls, her fright at five, abandoned in these woods alone.
An adept now, she aids the Weird in its fight with rising hell.

By-blow of a Moor, left as dross in these weird weeping,
raised by the fey, she was taught good from evil well.
An adept now, she aids the glade in its fight with rising hell;
her blessed-onyx points, caste blackhearts from the dell. 

Raised by the fey, she was taught good from evil well.
The Blood moon’s rise brings hell’s minions out in droves;
her blessed-onyx points, caste blackhearts from the dell. 
Defilers die by her hand and Druid bow bespelled.

The Blood moon’s rise brings hell's minions out in droves.
Rain caught in the leaves revives; moss clots her blood. 
Defilers die by her hand and Druid bow bespelled,
as she protects the oak and ash from whispering hell.  

Rain caught in the leaves revives; moss clots her blood. 
This night, she’s hurt hunting demons in her mother’s grove
as she protects the oak and ash from whispering hell. 
For good, the Druid woods claimed this girl child for its own.


First Published by After the Pause
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Shetley Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 2:03 PM
This may be my favorite of your poems so far. I'm not always a fan of pantoum but here you show me how it's done. perfect.
Guzzi Avatar
September 13, 2017 at 2:54 PM
Thank you Thvia, so you know this verse was written & rewritten for years before it was good enough to get published.
Duet Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 1:36 PM
Hi Debbie! I just stopped by and saw this excellent and mesmerizing pantoum. Maybe one day I'll be brave enough to try one.
Anish Avatar
March 5, 2017 at 9:01 PM
Nice use of this Malaysian form in a fantasy poem. The old legends still ring true to modern ears! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Guzzi Avatar
March 5, 2017 at 10:12 PM
so nice to see your name here Matt!~
Roper Avatar
February 26, 2017 at 7:21 PM
Love the Pantoum and I love the topic... hugs
Guzzi Avatar
February 26, 2017 at 9:27 PM
Thanks Eve! Nice to hear from you. Light & Love
Thirtyseven Avatar
February 23, 2017 at 7:14 AM
You weave words like woodland branches, to bring us a story as bright as the sun. Nice.
Guzzi Avatar
February 26, 2017 at 9:27 PM
Thanks Scott, I hope you're well & happy. Light & Love
Wolf Avatar
February 21, 2017 at 7:30 PM
The Awen shines brightly from your pen, Debbie! Absolutely loved this one.
Guzzi Avatar
February 21, 2017 at 7:32 PM
Thank you sister my wolf says hhhhhhhhhhhhhowwwwwl
White Avatar
February 21, 2017 at 5:46 AM
What a Pantoum! And a druid one too. I love both, and the combination is simply awesome :)
Coy Avatar
February 15, 2017 at 3:58 PM
Oh, marvellous, Debbie! A pantoum - and a terrific one! I love the Celtic/Pagan feel, and the recurring lines come in like an insistent drum rhythm. There's a female-centric, wicca feel to this one. Well done! (Michael)
Guzzi Avatar
February 15, 2017 at 4:46 PM
Yup! You got it Michael ;) Thank you!
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