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Sometimes I feel like Data an android an autist binary and metal mind over matter Forever searching humanity Never being able to pass through metal detectors Having deep emotions misunderstood impossible to express Questioning and inquisitive sad without crying happy without laughing I feel like Data with my green eyes always *** May 11, 2017 Copyright © Darren White

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Date: 5/13/2017 10:00:00 PM
Excellent my friend. You are more than just data you are a rainbow painting the world a smile.
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Darren White
Date: 5/13/2017 11:47:00 PM
Thanks my friend, that is a beautiful thing you say!
Date: 5/13/2017 9:57:00 PM
Data a great poem!!!! Amazing!!!
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Darren White
Date: 5/13/2017 11:41:00 PM
Aywa, thanks my friend :)
Date: 5/13/2017 6:40:00 PM
What another beautiful creative piece Darren, which I don't think Data could have spun. I absolutely loved that character who wanted to experience more of the human condition, and I see why you would sometimes feel like him:) Amitiés
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Darren White
Date: 5/13/2017 11:34:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Marie. He is by far my favourite character in any of the series... He is insanely good created and the artist playing him is incredible. That subtle humour, his emotions, everything.
Date: 5/13/2017 3:47:00 AM
Hi Darren ,' except in poems ', yes beautiful write , I like to do a bit of fun and deep etc and I find a great comford writing ones feelings :)))
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Darren White
Date: 5/13/2017 7:57:00 AM
Thanks, and yes, this combo is exactly that, bit of fun, bit serious indeed :)
Date: 5/13/2017 2:53:00 AM
Morning Darren. This entry makes me go hmmmmm. "Having deep emotions undetected impossible to express except in poems Questioning and inquisitive sad without crying happy without laughing" The all of it is very expressive and so creative. What can I say other than top level.
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Darren White
Date: 5/13/2017 2:59:00 AM
The poem is the result (or the fault) of a conversation Chris and I had earlier. We both love Star Trek. I recognise things in Data and I find him endearing :) Thanks my friend.
Date: 5/12/2017 11:44:00 PM
Beautiful!
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Darren White
Date: 5/13/2017 2:55:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 5/12/2017 7:28:00 PM
I love Star Trek the Next Generation. Data was so fun :D You do express so much in your poems - you reach so many with your words. Not Data but Darren <3
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Darren White
Date: 5/12/2017 11:11:00 PM
I love Data :) I don't mind having a few characteristics in common plus my green eyes <3
Date: 5/12/2017 5:31:00 PM
That is such an interesting way of describing the way you feel, Darren - and it makes sense to me. I love reading your poetry, though - writing like this is something Data could not do :)
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Darren White
Date: 5/12/2017 11:10:00 PM
He most certainly wouldn't be able to :) I wonder what his poetry would look like! Thanks Agnes.
Date: 5/12/2017 12:51:00 PM
Having worked with aspergers studentsi can relate to your comparison i always loved Data in next generation... you may have similarities but you have a massive heart:-) hugs Jan xx
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Darren White
Date: 5/12/2017 1:01:00 PM
Heya Jan, I am very happy that you like my heart! And yeah, if it weren't for you understanding me the way I was in my early Soup days, I would have disappeared quickly :)
Date: 5/12/2017 12:27:00 PM
One of my favorite characters...not Data, you. : ) Ok, Data was my favorite Next Generation character but you are my favorite poetic character. Really nice my friend. Beaming over a few smiles your way. "Energize"
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Darren White
Date: 5/12/2017 11:13:00 PM
Jean Luc has that voice that makes me all melt inside hah! Plus he is very handsome yes. (He really is, weird huh?)
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/12/2017 5:17:00 PM
Oh I love that episode too - hubby and I watched all the next generation series last year and I have to admit Jean Luc Picard is extremely watchable - its the voice lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Chris Green
Date: 5/12/2017 1:13:00 PM
That is one of my favorite episodes as well.
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Darren White
Date: 5/12/2017 12:51:00 PM
"Energize!" :D It is your fault that I wrote this you know? We talked about Data earlier this week. Plus I am watching all episodes of "Next Generation" at the moment. Data makes me smile, and laugh out loud, A few minutes ago he was Sherlock Holmes, one of the best ever....

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