Darkness

Darkness brings shadows eerie shapes appear
Things look spooky when there’s no one here
Nothing looks the same when the day turns into night
The least little noise can bring fear and fright

The corners of the rooms are dark and black
Things won’t be the same until the light comes back
Floorboards creak as the house settles into calm
Darkness is upon us but it won’t do any harm

Sleepy eyes are shutting and it’s time to go to bed
Darkness is here so it’s time to rest my head
Why do things seem worse when the night is here?
Laying and waiting for the daylight to appear

Worrying and wondering about stupid things
Then listening to the chorus as the early bird sings
The sun rises in the sky and with it comes the day
Dark and dismal shadows are going away

What was all the worrying about during the night?
Nothing seems as bad in the daylight.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 10/31/2009 5:21:00 AM
Nice piece Pamela, have a lovely weekend >> James
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Date: 10/30/2009 7:02:00 PM
I love it, great for th weekend, WS
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Date: 10/29/2009 1:25:00 PM
Thank you for writing this incredible poem and sharing it with us Pamela. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/29/2009 9:26:00 AM
Hi Pamela: Thank you for yor honest opinion of my poem. I can not tell you how much it means to me to get feedback from another poet. Your poem "Darkness" is really great. It brought back memories when laying in my bed at night, I would imagine monsters under my bed and killers in my closet. Have a fantastic day!!!. yours truly: S.M.
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Date: 10/29/2009 3:52:00 AM
Night can be scary especially if one hears something or feels that something is not right. Nicely done. Thanks for the comments on mine. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 10/28/2009 7:14:00 PM
Nice...enjoyed reading...Marty
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