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Darkness

Surrounded by darkness- I am broken seeking the light

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 4/4/2024 5:21:00 PM
I felt a bit sad, almost teary eyed when I read the emotional last line.
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Karen Croft
Date: 4/4/2024 7:16:00 PM
Sometimes I feel like this until I see the light
Date: 4/4/2024 12:47:00 PM
aww i have a huge lump in my throat Karen - the final line actually gave me chills down my spine. so few words paint such a vivid image in this emotional piece. hugs Jan xx
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Karen Croft
Date: 4/4/2024 7:16:00 PM
Thanks Jan! Life is a vicious cycle

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