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Darkened Mind

How often do I hide in thick layers
of parading masks-- afraid to  reveal
the hardened ego which denies
a vanity ruled by a sordid past -
those matriarchal flaws, cracks from
violence, and lesions of snuffed anger
marked by wired illusions 
over time's unhealed grievances.

I smile with resistance existing 
through fragile acquaintances to escape
light's awakening that could lead
me out of life's pretenses.
So I hover drearily on bloody nights
and run to the woods in search of sages,
even wise thieves , who could give me
refuge from this soul going imaginary-
but my darkened mind lies, asking
"pride, how treacherous or precious are you?"


Russell Sivey Contest: In The Dark
Created 14.09.2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 4/27/2018 9:55:00 AM
You know what it says in the Bible "pride goeth before a fall." Good luck in the contest. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 9/27/2017 7:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement with your beautiful poem :)
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Date: 9/22/2017 10:27:00 AM
Gabby, CONGRATULATIONS on your placement with this wonderfully penned poem!
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Date: 9/22/2017 10:21:00 AM
Congratulations,Gabby , wonderful write. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 9/22/2017 7:20:00 AM
Congrats!!! on your great win Gabby...god bless...^WW^
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