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Darkened Mind

How often do I hide in thick layers of parading masks-- afraid to reveal the hardened ego which denies a vanity ruled by a sordid past - those matriarchal flaws, cracks from violence, and lesions of snuffed anger marked by wired illusions over time's unhealed grievances. I smile with resistance existing through fragile acquaintances to escape light's awakening that could lead me out of life's pretenses. So I hover drearily on bloody nights and run to the woods in search of sages, even wise thieves , who could give me refuge from this soul going imaginary- but my darkened mind lies, asking "pride, how treacherous or precious are you?" Russell Sivey Contest: In The Dark Created 14.09.2017

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Date: 4/27/2018 9:55:00 AM
You know what it says in the Bible "pride goeth before a fall." Good luck in the contest. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 9/27/2017 7:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement with your beautiful poem :)
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Date: 9/22/2017 10:27:00 AM
Gabby, CONGRATULATIONS on your placement with this wonderfully penned poem!
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Date: 9/22/2017 10:21:00 AM
Congratulations,Gabby , wonderful write. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 9/22/2017 7:20:00 AM
Congrats!!! on your great win Gabby...god bless...^WW^
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