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Dark Wine-----Dark Eyes

Your warm hands hold mine, That with desire both shine and shiver. Like the moon, looking for a silvered river. Oh, how long for you I pined. Sparkling burgundy wine, in tinkling crystal glass. Hypnotized by your Arcadian, invasive eyes. This moment, under clear San Francisco night skies. That time still lives eternally, which nothing can surpass! Your sweater, soft and dark, green like a sensuous forest. Stop time in this place~ no, there is far more ahead for us. We, in love, so totally, eternally obsessed. I felt like your goddess in a golden, Greek, love-!bodice! 3/5/2021 ~6 ~ Quatrain A,B,B,A

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 3/6/2021 10:50:00 PM

Nice rhyme scheme in this piece, it has an amazing feel when read.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/7/2021 4:39:00 PM

Wowie, ML, you know how highly I respect your views and your touch on my poetry.I will agree with your comment, totally. This is one of my personal FAVS. Merci, Panagiota xx

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/6/2021 11:08:00 AM

Hello Panagiota, I read this poem as romantic. I can feel the passion. Hugs Darlene xx

Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/6/2021 11:37:00 AM

Hi again my friend. You got it right! It's hardly a joke or a limerick -)) Important to me that you felt the passion. Thank you Pangie xxxooo

Robert Lindley

Date: 3/6/2021 7:45:00 AM

A truly enticing and romantic creation this beauty is! You my friend score big with this one. While reading it , I feel that it must have came from a life experience and a blessing you once had. Most definitely a fav and one that you have presented on my birthday March 5th! God bless...

Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/6/2021 10:13:00 AM

Of course it's a true life experience. I know you get the depth in my Poetry, Robert. I agree,this is far from a mundane poem. I cannot believe we are both Pisces! How magnificent is that? Happy Birthday, dear Robert. My daughter is March 10th. Mine is March 13th. Marvelous, eh? I really like this poem+. Hope your birthday is filled with gratitude, blessings and the realization of the great poet you are. You light up the atmosphere of Poetry Soup. Thank you, from your fans, here and elsewhere. Panagiota xx