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Dark Whispers

Oh, dark whispers in my ear Alarming words, brushed with fear Directions for a gloomy turn For clouded thought, for hope to burn I hear dark whispers jeer and taunt As judgment gropes in feeble haunt A recipe for consequence Of shadowed troubled dominance I must dispel these grains of doubt And silence them in verbal drought To seek the light of certain tide No more dark whispers to deride

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 1/26/2018 10:00:00 PM
They do taught us at times when we allow it. When I am tired I am most vulnerable. Great us of language Mike. You have a rare gift. Thank you for sharing.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/27/2018 6:28:00 AM
Thanks Joe, there are so many others way way more talented than what I may have but I love to write and glad you liked it!!
Date: 1/15/2018 6:57:00 PM
Love it, Mike! And thanks for your visit to my poem and your kind comment.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/16/2018 7:27:00 AM
Thanks so much, Agnes xxoo
Date: 1/14/2018 11:04:00 AM
I like the line silence them in verbal drought. And that you will do! Good one Mike :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/14/2018 2:58:00 PM
Thank you so much, Heidi, Happy Sunday to you xxxooo
Date: 1/6/2018 5:45:00 PM
Lovely, Mike. Charming.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/6/2018 8:15:00 PM
Thank you, Line!!
Date: 1/5/2018 4:25:00 PM
A mind wandering the dark..well described..you are right Mike..these dark taunts must be silenced!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/5/2018 4:29:00 PM
Right, Vijay, Have a great weekend!
Date: 1/5/2018 3:05:00 PM
Don't listen to them Mike...Be strong...deep and dark write...
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/5/2018 4:30:00 PM
Gonna try, thanks !!
Date: 1/5/2018 2:43:00 PM
Hello Mike, block those dark whispers from your ears,you do not need them my friend. Xxx-Ooo Have a nice day my friend.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/5/2018 2:50:00 PM
Thanks Darlene, will do !!! xxxoo

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