Dark To Light --- Soul

My soul emaciated, starved since birth A cold ebony soul that has no worth Love, feelings, emotion, nothing but words Lasso of Hell pulls me with the unsaved herds God had a purpose for this blackened Soul He started with His Grace, to cleanse my Soul A Purification that made me whole, a Redeemed SOUL GOD'S LIGHT surrounds me : Thank-YOU GOD for I am Whole

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 2/13/2012 7:59:00 PM

Excellent one! This is going in my favorites for sure. I love the last stanza. And the first I can relate to tremendously. Once again, excellent job! Always, Laura

Lynette Chachere

Date: 2/20/2010 3:09:00 AM

Wow, Were there movements with your poem here. Healing changes your spirit just as you said. which i believe that makes your precious memories even more cherished to think about.Because you are calmer, and your thoughts are more so positive.so when that happens, your mind, grants you with the thing that you want most.and you are more aware, that it will happen one point in time. I am glad of your poem.but just always know that you never have to be "afraid" of 'anything'. -Always&Forever Lynn

John Loving Iii

Date: 1/22/2009 5:24:00 PM

amen and amen. nicely put. john h loving iii

Date: 1/18/2009 4:41:00 PM

Powerful poem with a inspirational message. Through God we indeed become whole. The title is so fitting. Good job! Thank you for sharing this poem with us and for your congrats. Keep on writing. Have a good week! Karen

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 1/16/2009 7:22:00 AM

Glad to read this..Its quite wonderful. I hope you are feeling better..I've missed you. Beeg

Sharon Winter

Date: 1/16/2009 4:39:00 AM

You are indeed a beautiful soul at that. Deeply spiritual and beautiful write. Love & hugs, Shar xoxo

Raul Moreno

Date: 1/15/2009 7:23:00 PM

Lovely wrods HG, I thank Him for being whole too...Raul