Dark Storm Clouds Gather

dark storm clouds gather and cover the mountain top... lightening flashes

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/17/2011 3:50:00 PM

Nice one for her contest, Barbara. Gosh, I have n't seen much of you lately. How have you been? and congrats on making the winners' list!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/17/2011 11:22:00 AM

Congratulations Barbara on your win in this Haiku contest of Debbie Guzzi. Love, Carol

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/15/2011 9:50:00 AM

I can feel the charge in the air!! Congrad's Light & Love

Margaret Foster

Date: 11/12/2011 6:26:00 PM

The build up is evident here, soon the storm will break... good one Barbara...Margaret

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/8/2011 3:19:00 PM

barb the only advise i have is do not use the word [rest] it is subjective not objective..it's your judgement and personification, none of which are used in haiku..[hang above] would work or some factual observation other than that it's Aces....light & love

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/8/2011 11:40:00 AM

It must be a spectacular view to see the mountains against the backdrop of storm clouds, dear LNC. Awesome haiku! Iolanda was telling me of recent storms in her area. Perhaps you had them too? (I'm mailing Christmas cards early this year -- I'm not sure where I'll be over the holidays.) Love, Carolyn

Jack Horne

Date: 11/8/2011 10:15:00 AM

Lovely dramatic haiku, Barbara. Many congrats on your wins too : )

Poet Tacito

Date: 11/8/2011 8:33:00 AM

Yes! I love me some thunder & lightning. Well done! :)