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Dark Night - City Streets - For Contest

Dark Night – City Streets A dark night on city streets soft yellow glare of streetlights outlining slow creepy things. Scents of cooling kitchens and boiling excitement tickled the deepening thrill. A rising tremor of frightful glee slinking through the streets mocking the shadows lies. City streets crawling with anticipation window shades peeked through doors held ajar in preparation, For they would come – as always on this, their night, utter again the monsters mantra – Trick or Treat. Flow in wicked waves of want seek the lowly sustenance of the sticky sweet tribute. Short, weary legs of demons tire easily - and slowly retreat to comfort of warm lairs. Window shades are straightened doors closed and locked streetlight shadows calmed As monsters – cleaned and preened, hugged and nuzzled in their nests sleep, and dream, of Halloween. 10/24/2015

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Date: 11/1/2015 5:23:00 PM
You sure captured the mood of anticipations and "...rising tremor of frightful glee..." on city streets on Halloween night, John. Nice imagery! Congratulations on your fine win. Sandra
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Date: 11/1/2015 10:55:00 AM
John, Congratulations on your Halloween win in Kelly's contest. SKAT
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Date: 10/30/2015 11:45:00 PM
Great poem! Congratulations!
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John Lawless
Date: 10/31/2015 8:30:00 AM
Thanks Susan for stopping to read and comment.
Date: 10/30/2015 4:14:00 PM
great poem and congratulations on your win.
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John Lawless
Date: 10/31/2015 8:30:00 AM
Thanks for stopping by Joyce.
Date: 10/30/2015 1:13:00 PM
A wonderful poem that sets just the right mood for Halloween!... I enjoyed your poem very much, John. Congrats on a great win!
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John Lawless
Date: 10/31/2015 8:29:00 AM
Thanks Kelly, I just shut my eyes and slid back into the past.
Date: 10/27/2015 3:57:00 PM
Oh, it for a halloween contest!! Great writing, John. The ending is so sweet!!
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John Lawless
Date: 10/31/2015 8:29:00 AM
Thanks Andrea as always
Date: 10/27/2015 7:20:00 AM
This is great...eerie yet fun. You recreated the excitement and trepidation.
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John Lawless
Date: 10/31/2015 8:28:00 AM
..excitement and trepidation...yes.....candy....no.....Appreciate your stopping by Monterey
Date: 10/26/2015 5:37:00 PM
Hi John, you managed to create a Halloween atmosphere with ease. Such 'frightful' fun for the young ones! ~ Regards // paul
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John Lawless
Date: 10/31/2015 8:28:00 AM
Thanks Paul, the neighborhood I grew up in had hundreds of children running about the streets on Halloween...
Date: 10/24/2015 11:00:00 AM
DEMONS OR KIDS? LOL Fine poem my friend , good luck in that contest.A7
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John Lawless
Date: 10/31/2015 8:27:00 AM
Or.....demons are kids....thanks for the high mark Robert.
Date: 10/24/2015 10:13:00 AM
oh John I adore the imagery - the demons with short tired legs made me smile -you have a fabulous way of weaving your observations into the poem so cleverly:-) loved this - 7 :-) hugs Jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/24/2015 10:22:00 AM
You did a fabulous job John:-) hugs Jan xx
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John Lawless
Date: 10/24/2015 10:21:00 AM
Hey Jan, in 1953 I was one of those "city demons". Glad you liked it as I had some fun writing it trying to recapture the sights, sounds, and scents of a city street.

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