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Dark Deafing Shivers

dark night flash of light deafing clap of thunder dog jumped on my lap 5/24/2016

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Funom Makama

Date: 5/30/2016 11:27:00 AM

Great write, beautiful lines. A well deserved 7

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/29/2016 5:32:00 PM

oh this is SO cute. I really enjoyed this one.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/29/2016 12:23:00 AM

Beautiful, I was reading that there was a lot of lightening in southern USA recently!

Paul Callus

Date: 5/28/2016 6:17:00 AM

You aptly present an instinctive reaction that affects both animals and humans, Eve! Thunderbolts can be more than scary...I've had modems, tv sets, etc ruined by them. ~ Hugs // paul

Sandra Haight

Date: 5/25/2016 8:21:00 PM

Great Senryu, Eve! Love the twist in the last line. Hugs, Sandra

Eve Roper
Date: 5/25/2016 10:52:00 PM

Thank you, Sandra, so much. Hugs Eve

Walter T. Ashe

Date: 5/25/2016 2:29:00 PM

The visual of this senryu is exactly that..."very visual" and also heard! Three line with great sense impact!

Eve Roper
Date: 5/25/2016 10:51:00 PM

Thank you, Walter, that is a very great compliment. A haiku or Senryu or not very easy to write for me.

Becca Teagan

Date: 5/25/2016 1:54:00 PM

Aw.. Sounds like my dog :) Love this!!

Eve Roper
Date: 5/25/2016 10:49:00 PM

Hello, Becca, thank you that is actually me. Haha.....

Jan Allison

Date: 5/25/2016 12:14:00 PM

I'm not a thunder fan either Eve - great poem:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper
Date: 5/25/2016 10:49:00 PM

hello dear friend thunder makes a lot of dogs run away from home around here.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/25/2016 3:17:00 AM

Excellent dear Eve! Loved it!

Eve Roper
Date: 5/25/2016 10:47:00 PM

Thank you, Demetrios, you for kind compliment. :)