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Dark Deafing Shivers

dark night flash of light deafing clap of thunder dog jumped on my lap 5/24/2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Funom Makama
Date: 5/30/2016 11:27:00 AM
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Great write, beautiful lines. A well deserved 7
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/29/2016 5:32:00 PM
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oh this is SO cute. I really enjoyed this one.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/29/2016 12:23:00 AM
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Beautiful, I was reading that there was a lot of lightening in southern USA recently!
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Paul Callus
Date: 5/28/2016 6:17:00 AM
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You aptly present an instinctive reaction that affects both animals and humans, Eve! Thunderbolts can be more than scary...I've had modems, tv sets, etc ruined by them. ~ Hugs // paul
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/25/2016 8:21:00 PM
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Great Senryu, Eve! Love the twist in the last line. Hugs, Sandra
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/25/2016 10:52:00 PM
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Thank you, Sandra, so much. Hugs Eve
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Walter T. Ashe
Date: 5/25/2016 2:29:00 PM
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The visual of this senryu is exactly that..."very visual" and also heard! Three line with great sense impact!
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/25/2016 10:51:00 PM
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Thank you, Walter, that is a very great compliment. A haiku or Senryu or not very easy to write for me.
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Becca Teagan
Date: 5/25/2016 1:54:00 PM
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Aw.. Sounds like my dog :) Love this!!
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/25/2016 10:49:00 PM
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Hello, Becca, thank you that is actually me. Haha.....
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/25/2016 12:14:00 PM
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I'm not a thunder fan either Eve - great poem:-) hugs Jan xx
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/25/2016 10:49:00 PM
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hello dear friend thunder makes a lot of dogs run away from home around here.
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/25/2016 3:17:00 AM
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Excellent dear Eve! Loved it!
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/25/2016 10:47:00 PM
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Thank you, Demetrios, you for kind compliment. :)

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