Dark and Twisted 1 Richard Kuklinski True Story

"Listen very closely Richard. I want
him tortured and I want it filmed. I
don't want my daughter to know. He
deals in drugs and he's got to go." 
Richard replies, "Ok."
 " I'll leave it up to you how you want
to kill him! Here's fifty grand."
Richard replies, "Thank you. You will
get the film, when I'm done with him."
 Richard Kuklinski was the most evil
hitman the world has ever known. With
over two hundred planned murders.
  When he was a young man. He
would like escaping into the New Jersey
country side where he had found a
cave. On one occasion he spotted a
dark furry animal running into the cave.
He couldn't make out what it was until
he got closer. Getting closer he noticed
the cave was full of large rats.
  He sat outside an apartment complex.
His experience taught him to be patient.
His wait was rewarded as his victim was
walking out. He rushed him from behind
put a gun to his head and handcuffed 
him. He then blindfolded him. " Mister
what do you want with me!?" "Shut UP!"
Richard replied as he put a blindfold 
over his victims eyes. " Please mister
don't hurt me!" The young man pleaded.
  Richard was heading to his favorite
torture place. It was starting to get 
dark, as he followed a dirt road off the 
major highway. The young man was
sobbing. Thinking of his coming demise.
Little did he know he would not have the
pleasantry of just being shot. What 
Richard had in store for him, was more
sinister and painful.
  He had reached his destination. The
young man was by now throwing up.
How would you feel if you knew you
were going to be killed, ponder that for 
a moment. What would go through 
your mind? 
  He laid him on his back, and restrained
him with shackles on his hands and feet.
Richard then went to his vehicle and got
his tripod and set it up, camera focused
on the victim. His blindfold was taken off.
  Richard then walked over to his victim
and stabbed him intentionally missing his
vital organs. He didn't want his victim to 
die right away. He wanted him to be
tortured first. He wanted to satisfy his
bosses demands. As the young man was
bleeding the terror was shown in his face
as he was desperately pleading for his life.
Richard showed no remorse.
  Richard watched as the young mans 
blood had attracted huge rats. Hundreds
of them. They started biting and eating 
his stomach where he had been stabbed.
The screams were awful. They made 
their way to his face. they chewed his eyes
and his entire face and into his brain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 10/4/2017 2:52:00 PM
Oh my goodness, now I see the story you were talking about. I guess you have done at least three of these. I think i was focusing on his name as the beginning of the title or something. I could easily find it today. what a horrible man this was, with no conscience. A belated congrats on your contest win. NOw I must go see the other poems!!
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Michael Tor
Date: 10/4/2017 9:27:00 PM
Sick stuff Andrea...
Date: 10/15/2015 9:39:00 PM
Hi Michael, Nice to see you on Nate's winning list. Congrats... Love SKAT
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Michael Tor
Date: 10/18/2015 10:59:00 PM
Thanks skat.
Date: 10/14/2015 7:56:00 PM
Congrats on a fine win my friend. Wicked and dark indeed.
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Michael Tor
Date: 10/15/2015 12:57:00 AM
Thanks so much Robert. Thanks for the visit.
Date: 10/14/2015 5:35:00 PM
what a gripping write - hope I can sleep tonight Michael !congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Michael Tor
Date: 10/15/2015 12:56:00 AM
Thank you Jan. I hope you can sleep also my Dear. lol
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Michael Tor
Date: 10/14/2015 5:43:00 PM
Hi Shirley thanks for your feedback. Ann Rule was one of my favorite writers, and I too like you have read many books on this subject. It is an intriguing and depressing adventure to try and figure out what these individuals thought process and evilness comes from. Ed Gein, Ted Bundy, Oba Chandler,John Wayne Gacey, Jeffrey Dalhmer, Adolf Hitler. These is some of the list. Thanks for your visit.
Date: 10/14/2015 4:59:00 PM
After reading psychology books or books by law enforcement trying to understand why some people become serial killers, no matter what their background, they are truly twisted, evil people. Good write, sad there is a story like this and many more to tell.
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Date: 10/14/2015 12:44:00 PM
Yes, this is what I call truly "dark and twisted!" Now I'll sleep with all the lights on tonight! LOL. Congratulations, my friend on a well-deserved win! All the best. Pandita
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Date: 10/14/2015 8:09:00 AM
Nice write Michael, all the more terrible because it's real.
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Michael Tor
Date: 10/14/2015 5:27:00 PM
Yes James it does make more terrible. Thanks for your insight.
Date: 10/13/2015 11:45:00 PM
Wonderful take on the theme michael with this superb winning write! Big congrats!
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Michael Tor
Date: 10/14/2015 1:24:00 AM
Thank you Dr. Sharma. I appreciate your comments!
Date: 10/13/2015 11:44:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on this wonderful win! It was an amazing write dear friend
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Michael Tor
Date: 10/14/2015 1:23:00 AM
Eve thank you for your appreciated comments. Blessings.
Date: 10/13/2015 9:39:00 PM
Wow' thank you. nate
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Michael Tor
Date: 10/13/2015 10:24:00 PM
Nate thanks for your comments. I appreciate your feedback.
Date: 9/30/2015 6:43:00 PM
Devastating but people need to know what evil exists on this earth. Well done!
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Michael Tor
Date: 10/13/2015 10:25:00 PM
It is true what you say Joan it is full of evil.
Date: 9/21/2015 4:20:00 PM
Michael, this is well written twisted and very dark! I steer clear from these kinds of writes but your piece had my full attention. This pen of yours gave me the chills. It should do good in the contest. Good luck in the contest:-) Alexis 7 P.S. I penned a dark write called "The Boy Next Door". When you get the chance read it at let me know what you think.
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Michael Tor
Date: 10/13/2015 10:26:00 PM
Thank you Alexis for reading I know it was difficult for you.
Date: 9/21/2015 3:16:00 PM
Michael, this truly is the stuff of nightmares and what makes it worse is the fact that it actually happened, and thanks for visiting my poem, immortal -senryu 16 . . .
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Michael Tor
Date: 10/13/2015 10:27:00 PM
You are so right Constance. Thanks for the kind words and your feedback.
Date: 9/19/2015 11:44:00 AM
whoa...will have to give it a rest before I go to Part 2. Truth is indeed stranger than fiction...Did that part of his brain and heart die, to be able to do this to another person? Sick...
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Michael Tor
Date: 9/19/2015 3:47:00 PM
It did Kim. He was abused horribly when he was a child. both his parents killed his brother and covered it up by saying he fell down the stairs. You have to read the book. It is mind boggling. Sickness brought on by physical abuse.
Date: 9/19/2015 12:21:00 AM
Major torture Michael well depicted. Verlena
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Michael Tor
Date: 9/19/2015 8:46:00 AM
Thank you Verlena for your observation.
Date: 9/18/2015 2:46:00 PM
PHEW.. hectic.. now getting to understand Ian's write a bit more.. moving onto the next one...
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Michael Tor
Date: 9/18/2015 2:55:00 PM
Thanks Kim for your comments. It's a very moving write of pain caused by evil in some.
Date: 9/18/2015 12:54:00 PM
I know the story, dear Michael! You have described it accurately and vividly. Perfect narration.
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Michael Tor
Date: 9/18/2015 2:09:00 PM
Thank you Demetrios. It is sunny here today. God shining his love on us today. Thank you for reading this lengthy narration and thank you my friend for your thoughtful comments.
Date: 9/18/2015 10:44:00 AM
gruesome!!!! I have to read the next poem to see what comes next. Hugs Eve Oh! a 7++
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Michael Tor
Date: 9/18/2015 11:15:00 AM
It really was Eve and the actual film is even more horrific. Unbelievable what humans are capable of. This animal of a human being makes us realize the darkness that is in this world. Appreciate your comments.
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